What is Love?

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What is Love?

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Is it something you can touch or feel?
What dies it really take for the soul to heal?
Once the Oil spills
The heart bleeds
Has its wants and needs
For your answers need
What is Love?

Is it natural or buyable?
And if it were
Is it cheap or pricely
I find it hard to understand
The while thing surprise me
Their answers to me vulnerable
What is Love?

Does everyone have it?
Can anyone have it?
And if it were
Why's the heart so heartless
The world gets dark
The Storm brings earthquakes still leaving me in darkness
What is Love?
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Great questions about love. My take would be that love is difficult to understand. I'll try write a reply poem to this.
Nice poem!
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love is the root of every relationship
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Love is not static.. its an ever changing situation that leads to something unexplainable. If one chooses to box in love they will never enjoy the fruits and experience of it
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Does everyone have it? Yes, but not everyone will use it to do good.
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Good points about love and it's difficult to grasp what it is. I see love as caring about someone unconditionally. Putting their needs above yours. Love is free but valuable beyond measure. Not everyone has it but I'll bet everyone has experienced it in some way. Thank you for the wonderful poem. I hope you have a lovely evening.
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Very good poem
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I came here to know the answers. But I got bewildered by your questions. To me love is something I didn't experienced yet🤣. Literally I enjoyed your writing. 👍
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When the poem started asking if love can be bought and at what price, that's when my eyes started to water.

Excellent job!
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John Owen wrote: 30 Apr 2021, 05:08 Great questions about love. My take would be that love is difficult to understand. I'll try write a reply poem to this.
Nice poem!
Once you finish that poem in reply to this one, please let me know, for I'd love to read it.
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