I guess I can Write about Everything

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Abigail09
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I guess I can Write about Everything

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When I wake up,
Just after praying,
I take my phone,
Hoping to have received as many messages as possible,
Hoping that something good happened while I was asleep,
Hoping that a situation changed.

When I wake up,
I think of how another opportunity has come,
A new day for me,
To hope, want, need and have.

When I wake up,
I think of better ways to grow,
I think of better ways to help people to grow.

When I wake up,
I pray I don't lose hope,
Because that is one of my greatest fears; Hope.

I guess I can write about everything.
Life itself is a diary.
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John Owen
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Post by John Owen »

"When I wake up I think of better ways to grow and make other people grow." Thats good of the persona. I love this piece ❤️❤️
Harmony in chaos. It's all a matter of perspective.
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I must also make a mention of the last stansa, "life is but a diary." But aren't we the ones who decide what to write in the diary? We therefore have the power to influence the course our lives take, every time we wake up.
Harmony in chaos. It's all a matter of perspective.
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