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samyak bagrecha
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Post by samyak bagrecha »

i hate you
for making me love you
under the midnight sky
when we danced in each others arms
only to leave me beneath a thousand more
where i can only miss you
but never dance again
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Post by Rayah Raouf »

I like reading freestyle poetry. It's so raw but beautiful.
Memories are dangerous things. You turn them over and over, until you know every touch and corner, but still you'll find an edge to cut you.― Mark Lawrence, Prince of Thorns
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Post by John Owen »

Brief and wonderful. The suspense though...
Does being left "to a thousand arms where I can not dance again" mean you were left to other people who don't satisfy you?
Harmony in chaos. It's all a matter of perspective.
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