What Grace Means to Me

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Jenala Mzaza
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Re: What Grace Means to Me

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So inspiring I love it💞
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lovw this poem states everything I read is true in people
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Post by Maureen Halpin »

I found this poetry very interesting and written with a lot of depth in feeling.
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Post by Andrea Collard »

Motivation to those who have lost hope.
Great poem
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Post by Chicohats »

I also want to live just simple and free.
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Post by Rita Iray »

It's very inspiring.Good job
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Post by Dessirae Tigris »

Excellent poem, this could be somebodies amazing grace and could lead in their turn around today, deep and meaningful.

Keeping on writing poetry. you must be reminded of how special you are. The light that you emit can light up even the dullest stars, stay fabulous wherever you are.
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Post by Jesus Luyo »

More like being centered without conforming to mediocrity. Like taking the goods of each aspect.
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Post by Wandeka Salim »

To love and forgive unconditionally. See boundaries without crossing them. This is such an amazing content that any human with a piece of mind can like.
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Post by win zain »

Very inspiring.
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Post by Nadine Jones Graham »

I loved it. A message that we can all relate to. I think the line that says to treat your body as a temple but not your true self. Is for us to treat our body well not to abuse it with drugs, over indulgence of food or lack thereof etc but at the same time remember that it is just given to us for a while and our body soon will be taken to respect it without worshipping it.
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Post by Mirriam Nyirenda 1 »

Wow!!I like this poem it's talking about our everyday living
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Post by KEABETSWE KOTSOKOANE »

I like it. It's a good representation of how one can balance life.
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Post by Jennifer Rowley »

A very well written, thought provoking poem, of a search of fine balance within oneself of grace or the opposite end of spectrum. Simple explanation of one body filled with the love of grace and another body that is void of appreciation.
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Post by Fatima Flores 3 »

A good, well thought out piece. The writer somehow misses the point of being human. The person is compared to societal norms and if he/she doesn't meet them, they are less than perfect . The writer assumes that all can reach the point existential control without factoring in circumstantial control . The poem leaves you with a sense of depression. It assumes that you without consequence have power to dissern your own life choices. In reality we all have so much to consider, family , source of income, maintaining false relationships to get ahead, just the daily hustle - which ultimately means you failed reaching the utopian you . You failed yourself- depressive thought.
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