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thisgirl818
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I fear the day
you're no longer mine
and I'll walk into the aisle
wearing somebody's ring
promising to someone else's vow
I fear the day
where your love expires
knowing mine will never will
as I long for you
whatever I'm going to do
I fear the day
I'll see you on the same side
of the street brightly smiling
holding a child that's not ours
I fear the day
I won't be there
to hold your hands in the toughest times
because she would already be there
I fear that day everyday
because a thousand rings
won't ever replace you
because you're you
I just wanted you
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Wow! Great poem. I also fear the day you'll be no more, when my love will follow you to the grave.

May I share this to my Facebook page?
Harmony in chaos. It's all a matter of perspective.
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