Grateful

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jermainebull
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Grateful

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I should be grateful with this life than whining,
I should be grateful that i have parents than nothing!
I should be grateful that i have a husband than none,
I should be grateful that i have kids than no one!

I should be grateful that i have home,
I should be grateful that i have car i call my own;
I should be grateful that i have work that i can tend,
And have friends who will give a hand.

I should be grateful for simple things
Including foods to eat,
I should be grateful everyday
Simply because i can breath;
How hypocrite am i not to see these beautiful things,
a wonderful life only God brings!
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Beautiful! I am thankful for this gentle reminder to be grateful for the little things.
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Post by John Owen »

Wow! We should be grateful for everything. This is a nice piece.

May I share this to Facebook?
Harmony in chaos. It's all a matter of perspective.
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