What Is This Feeling

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What Is This Feeling

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What is this feeling I feel for you?

Its so strong
What am I to do?

Should I stay?
Should I wait?
Should I call you right now?

Should I pick up the phone and dial those numbers?
Should I say sweet words and make you cry?

Do I want to?
Do I have to?
Do I have no choice?

Am I afraid to call?
And if so, why?

Why do I care?
Why do I try?

Maybe cuz I know your special deep down inside.

What is this feeling that I feel for you?
And what am I to do?
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Post by John Owen »

Wow! This Poem certainly sparks a million romantic feelings to the persona. Nice poem!
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