I Found You

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Cazablah
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I Found You

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I found You as the raven in the sky

I found You in my lover's gazing eyes

I found You standing tall as an oak tree

I found You, a friend standing beside me

I found You as grass under my bare feet

I found You in every soul I meet

I found You as the pen within my hand

I found You in every speck of sand

I found You as all of the stars at night

I found You as me, a light shining bright

I found You in all that I can now see

I found You in you, I found You in me
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And I found you so deep with your thoughts displayed on this poem
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"I found you in me" I love the way you have explained your thoughts in the poem.
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