An Anatomy of Pain

[HusainNecklace52]

It hurts, it hurts so bad
That I can't even begin to express
This utterly painful distress
Bubbling inside of me every second of everyday.
They ask me how it feels,
How I feel,
I shrug, smirk and decide to leave
Because how can I possibly explain
When they're so oblivious to my pain
Thinking that its only an act
A mere overreact
But they're blind to this simple fact
That it hurts...its hurts so bad!
It hurts to look at her face
It hurts to watch her smile
and have a good time
Time which was once shared with me
But now consists of everyone else besides me
Time!
Time which we once spent together
But is now spent in an empty room
With closed windows and doors
Staring at the ceiling top
Thinking about her and trying to stop
Stop! Stop! Stop now
There's not a single drop of hope now
Yet it hurts, it hurts so bad..

[Sumansona1344]

I am in the state when I am reading this. I was trying to hokd back my tears but it made them fall instantly. I can feel the heartbreak behind every single word.
I am worst at writing poetry but these are just a few lines which came to my mind after the poem ended. These are the words of my state right now.


It hurts so bad
That it feels as the worst pain
It hurts so bad
That I can't even explain
It hurts so bad
That I can't express
It hurts so bad
That I am tired of the mess
It hurts so bad
That now the only thing I want to do is rest

[Frannie Annie]

Interesting poem. I have a friend who could probably relate to this

[Samwisekoop]

The pain that you so obviously expressed in this poem is obvious! Very good poem!

[ReyvrexQuestor Reyes]

Wow, so heartfelt to the bone. I know I can't write this deeply. Very amazing and sincere.

[Avishi]

Just by reading this lines I felt the pain you share here. It's so sad to read. Great one. Keep writing.

[hayisa]

I resonated with this deeply and felt the pain the author was trying to convey. Such a nice poem and I love that the rhymes aren't forced.

[Kingcapitage]

I feel your pain, as I was reading I felt your pain writing this, you must have gone a lot with this heartbreak.

[krizrabbit]

I kinda felt that, maybe at some point we go through this kind of pain and situation. Reminded me of my own pain before. Time will also help you heal.