Love

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MissRhoiz
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Love

Post by MissRhoiz » 15 Apr 2018, 10:23

But then you go...

We started in "Hi",
But we ended in "Goodbye".
I want you here all the time,
But you just stayed here for a while.

It was like the day of my final judgment,
'Cause I put too much investment.
I attached myself too much,
Not knowing that it will hurt me a lot.

Things were all good yesterday
But then you go away,
I don't know why
But then you said "goodbye".

You made me feel that I was the luckiest,
Look at me now, feeling so helpless
I was in chaos.
I felt I was a living ghost.

I believed in you,
I trusted you,
I loved you,
I really do.

But then I realized,
Moments doesn't last forever
Now I'm in this corner,
Putting myself back again together.

I missed you.
But don't worry, I'm starting to forget you
I'll promise that I'll be alright,
So no need to check on me right?

I know that I need to move on
And life must go on
Though its hard to start,
I know everything is gonna be alright.

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Post by Miracle chika » 16 Apr 2018, 06:42

Nobody would ever love and care for you like yourself

Real love is rare,some people come just to make you think they worth forever but they worth for just a while

The best love you will ever experience is the love you have for yourself

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Post by crediblereading2 » 16 Apr 2018, 09:14

Your poem is very expressive. True and stable love comes from our Creator and ourselves.

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Post by Pink_Nation1 » 16 Apr 2018, 10:15

Your story is a lesson learner. It shows the real emotion.

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