The Artistry of God

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The Artistry of God

Post by anniezion » 09 Feb 2018, 07:19

When beauty is painted with colors
I see her on rainbow's brow
I see the haughtiness of peacocks
I understand why they feel proud

I see the lowliness of butterfies
I see the meekness of their wings
I see the happiness in their hearts
I understand why they feel glad
And i will tell you i f you wont doubt.

It is the touch of Grace and love
It is the artistry of God

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Post by CambaReviewer » 13 Feb 2018, 07:31

Hmm! Very nice poem. I never really thought of butterflies as lowly though... My favorite lines were:
I see the happiness in their hearts
I understand why they feel glad

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Post by Makenzi1986 » 16 Feb 2018, 04:23

Wow! God is artistic and geneous.

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Post by Chapsy » 16 Feb 2018, 16:26

Wow me love the poem it's awesome

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Post by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes » 18 Feb 2018, 20:34

Truly, God is magnanimous with His creation. They all serve to glorify, to be as blessings, and always with grace to humankind. Thanks for sharing your poem.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"

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Post by hismercysurrounding » 02 Apr 2018, 09:08

Great little poem! Indeed, God's artistry is amazing!

I would just correct the line "And i will tell you i f you wont doubt" to "And I will tell you if you won't doubt."

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