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Vivian Paschal
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Post by Vivian Paschal » 12 Jan 2018, 08:01

I see my scars when I see you

With your unending abuses

You mirror my imperfections

And remind me of my mistakes

They see you, they see beauty but

I see my scars when I see you

Your promises, the lies you told

E’en a strong heart cannot withstand

You say ‘Let’s start anew my love’

And though I want to fall again

I see my scars when I see you

And my heart can’t give way again

Oh I thought you were good enough

When I joined you on this journey

But with each try you fail and now

I see my scars when I see you

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Post by Cmhasi063 » 13 Jan 2018, 15:03

Hahahahahaha!I like it really,it reminds me during my school days

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