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Dust and Breath

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.

Dust and Breath

Post Number:#1 by Kat Berg
» 09 Nov 2017, 11:31

Dust & Breath

We are but dust and the breath of God
My, how it seems like such a small thing
When you put it that way

How is it that dust and breath
Could contain all this pain and sorrow
Of a life left behind

We are but dust and the breath of God
Oh, how glorious it seems
When you put it that way

How is it that dust
Is worthy
Of the very breath of God?
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Re: Dust and Breath

Post Number:#2 by johappy
» 14 Nov 2017, 01:30

This poem really made me think... wowza
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Post Number:#3 by Kat Berg
» 14 Nov 2017, 12:34

johappy wrote:This poem really made me think... wowza

Thanks :)
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Re: Dust and Breath

Post Number:#4 by Lincolnshirelass
» 15 Nov 2017, 04:48

An image I found at the same time comforting and thought-provoking. A little gem of a poem.
An Eye for an Eye only ends up making the whole world blind.

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