I Can Stand by Myself

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Re: I Can Stand by Myself

Post by Amagine » 05 Jun 2017, 14:42

Zzaakkiiyyaa wrote:This poem brings hope! I love it. You're very good with rhyme - something I struggle with.
I struggle with rhyming too at times. :lol:

Thanks for reading! :D
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Post by Ama Idim » 28 Jul 2017, 04:23

Nice... I cn relate

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Post by Amagine » 28 Jul 2017, 05:22

Thank you for reading! ?
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Post by ritah » 28 Jul 2017, 05:35

I like this poem a lot - I can definitely relate to some of it and the desire to rise above and stand up by my own strength.

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Post by Amagine » 28 Jul 2017, 05:51

Thank you for your kind words and for reading! ?
"Piglet noticed that even though he had a very small heart, it could hold a rather large amount of gratitude." -A.A Milne

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Post by Ambreen Kiran » 04 Aug 2017, 05:26

Owsum..!!
One of best Poems.. It Really Inspire me

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Post by geoffrey ngoima » 08 Sep 2017, 12:06

Nice, Amagine!
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Post by Amagine » 08 Sep 2017, 12:30

Thank you so much for reading!! ??
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Post by geoffrey ngoima » 08 Sep 2017, 12:56

Amagine wrote:Thank you so much for reading!! ??
You're welcome!
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Post by Preciosonic » 21 Sep 2017, 11:55

Great, I imagined each scene, when you fall, you shall indeed rise again
Better is not good enough but the best is yet to come. Let Love Lead.
By Prophet T.B.Joshua

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Post by Ashley Simon » 22 Sep 2017, 06:54

Love the rhyming in this poem. It flows so nicely! Beautiful sentiment!

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Post by Amagine » 30 Sep 2017, 12:41

Thank you for reading my poem! :)
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Post by peterparker » 12 Oct 2017, 01:09

After reading this I can say that, you are awesome

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Post by Amagine » 12 Oct 2017, 06:34

peterparker wrote:After reading this I can say that, you are awesome
Aww! Thanks so much! :happy-smileyflower:
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Post by Njengnjoro » 31 Oct 2017, 05:51

Good job with this piece. I'm starting to like your work.

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