What Grace Means to Me

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Nia Nuru
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Re: What Grace Means to Me

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Makes one question oneself! Grace is very meaningful through the eyes of this poet. Dont think i am gifted with alot of grace maybe its how we are raised. Fully grown adult still unlearning my childhood traumas. This poem is quite touching.
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A well thought out piece. The contrast between what live is and what is actually lived is well established.
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Post by Mooo El Nahal »

t is wonderful and full of powerful and positive inspirations, as are the expressions.🌹 Well said🌹
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A true definition of human life each passing second , it's like always being "in between"
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Post by Jaya Persaud »

It’s a very interesting piece of work since in these times a lot of people have been dealing with mental health problems and self identification. I love “To achieve ultimate inner peace without having to first suffer ultimate outward devastation.” It’s to show you don’t have to prove your self to anyone to achieve inner peace.
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A very introspective piece, facilitated my curiosity and yearning to fully connect with every word.
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Post by Romilia »

I don't like it,I love it
To be content,but not dead?
Hey the entire poem is deep..
Am motivated to press deeper into the spiritual realm because I read this poem...
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Post by Rose Kerubo 1 »

I love your piece. It's captivating especially since one can relate. In this Era we're living, we need a message like this to remind us who we are, what we do, the things we want/need and where we are heading. Thank so much for sharing!
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Post by Danielle Arnold 2 »

I felt this poem, as it hit on so many valid statements. The meaning of grace in my opinion is to process the ability to carry/conduct oneself with a kind and gentle nature. To not be too full of oneself but to be able to put yourself in another's shoes before hastily jumping to judgement, but also having the desire to help build up your fellow human. To have grace would encourage one to live by a moral code, believing in the golden rule, treating others as you want to be treated. The meaning of grace in my opinion is the action/characteristic of being a decent human being.
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Post by Liz Smith 6 »

A couple of ideas I would maybe debate, but overall you wrote a very nice piece that inspires a bit of contemplation on the part of the readers. Congrats on your creativity.
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Post by AnSy »

Very well written, every phase is very balanced. It's exactly what grace has to be. 😃
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This poem says it all, it definitely moved me. This is something all should read!
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Post by Meghan Soderholm »

This is an excellent representation of grace and the power it brings to everyone. If everyone discovers its power, the world will be a better place.
“Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why we call it the present.” - Eleanor Roosevelt
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Post by Denise Hamilton 1 »

A work of art that provokes conversations. Each line is carefully constructed with intensity and simplicity intertwined. This is one of those poems that readers keep close to their hearts as a daily devotional or an inspirational piece.
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Post by Nyx Kevin03 »

It's an insightful and beautiful poem, more people should read it and try to instill this poem in part of their lives. Often times people forget what grace is and what it can do to us if we live by it. I hope you write more.
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