Forest Poem
- AlexNeb
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Forest Poem
I am a Great Gray Stone.
I am a Great Gray Stone. Standing in the centre of a clearing.
I am a Great Gray Stone. Standing in the centre of a clearing. In the middle of a Forest.
I am a Great Gray Stone. Standing in the centre of a clearing. In the middle of a Forest. Golden Yellow Leaves fall about me.
I am a Great Gray Stone. Standing in the centre of a clearing. In the middle of a Forest. Golden Yellow Leaves fall around me. Vines of Emerald Green twining around me.
I am a Great Gray Stone. Standing in the centre of a clearing. In the middle of a Forest. Golden Yellow Leaves fall around me. Vines of Emerald Green twining around me. A Brook of Crystal Clear water Gurgles at my feet.
That's all I have for now. However I'd like to add more about where I am and the surrounding areas. I just can't think of anything more. I'm also torn between keeping the place as a Forest or turning it into the Woods. Appreciate any feedback and/or criticism.
- DATo
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Very interesting structure!
Actually, as I was reading this I had the sensation of a movie camera in very close focus to a boulder and gradually backing away to reveal the other elements in the scene. I don't think I have ever encountered this device in any other poem I have ever read. Nicely done!!!
― Steven Wright
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