I saw him in the same position

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Abigail09
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I saw him in the same position

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We stayed far from each other.
I stayed in town.
He stayed in the outskirts.
We would talk for hours a day.
We would visit each other sometimes.
It felt so good; refreshing.
Then, we moved closer.
We lived in the same house.
It was three days and three nights after moving in together.
Then, I saw him in that position;
The position I was when we stayed far from each other;
Under my blanket, murmuring words to him that sounded like the humming of bees.
I saw him in that same position I was; he was humming words but I wasn't on the other side of the call.
It was to someone else not me.
The painful part was that I couldn't complain, it was not even cheating.
You were just in that same position I was when I was falling for you.....
Should I be scared? Should I......


*Love and its sides
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Love is a mage... It can wound and heal hearts at the same time. Good poem! You should write more!!
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Veena_Balakrishnan wrote: 11 Jan 2021, 03:18 Love is a mage... It can wound and heal hearts at the same time. Good poem! You should write more!!

Thank You🤗🤗
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