Love Sonnet 229

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Re: Love Sonnet 229

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Angul Sonti wrote:
01 Aug 2020, 01:06
Its very good! The topic of about love can be stereotypical, I personally liked that you have only showcased an idea/content (that love can be a salvation for others) out of vast imagery's about love. You have broken down the topic of love to little things, which is great. Because we don't want to hear the same thing about love everytime.
Love means so many things to so many people. Each one has her or his own concept of love. But it is reassuring that all things would all boil down to the same thing. Thanks for passing by.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.

-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)

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