WHAT IS LIFE?

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MaryAnne Atieno
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WHAT IS LIFE?

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What is life?
If help is gotten,
From the rear,
And oneself,
Sinks into a deep ocean,
Never to be recovered,
Strength,
A rare commodity,
Bought by the fearless,
Sang by the high,
Mighty ones,
Breathe,
Live,
Dream it,
If pushed by the inheritance,
Then I guess my heritage so poor,
For all I know,
When they seek to aid themselves,
I scheme to aid,
On my side,
If only walls could talk,
I'd let them know of my dire need,
To secure a place with strength,
If only windows could see,
I'd show them my vulnerability,
Standing up for myself,
I just cant,
Maybe my world so cursed,
The choice to be otherwise,
Is not an option in my book,
With the world on my case,
I am nothing but,
If this is not perfect timing,
Frustrations, dissapointments,
Coming in,
I dont understand,
When is,
If I go on,
In this way,
The battlefield maybe clear,
But the vineyard,
Just a saying,
By the successful,
Where there is a will,
There is a way,
Where there is grumpiness,
There is a roadblock,
Where its gregarious,
There is a deep surface,
I need rescue,
For I know where I will it,
I can have it,
The strength,
The power,
The courage,
To do my own,
Without owning,
Other soul's power
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Post by gravity016 »

life is of mysteries, there is no straight road which always lead to human.
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Post by MaryAnne Atieno »

Thankyou for your honest reply. Its true life is a puzzle that has to be sort out with such ingenuity but all the same even if you do your best someone somewhere works harder to undo the puzzle.
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The intricacies of life're hidden in thought and only requires the eyes of strength to be revealed.
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