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It was a story of a lonely soldiers. In this story there were 4 soldiers who had a mission to a secret place where they had to go to enemies place to get coordinates one of them was a leader of group name as jack. They covered large distance finely they saw enemy leader rahuan they all setted camp thereAt the morning he saw some goat grazer they arrest her but he says he not know anything they leave her the next morning 200 people of enemy leader attacked on their camp.They killed almost 150 enemies but they 4 are so injury they tried to contact the base but the 50 other attacked them and killed 2 of group members only jack and radio controller were alive jack distracted all the enemies so that radio controller can contact he gived away his life. The base get coordinate but radio controller was also died the base bombarded on emeys and killed the leader and safe the near by areas.
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