My Brother (Very Short Story)

[Rhozel1]

Interesting! Nice work!

[saluadak]

A story that drags you along and make you feel you are in there. It triggers the untapped cells of imagination and allows you develop your own stories. Wonderful composition.

[Simran_august12]

loved the story, racy, intriguing. however i would have loved it if the author had ended the story with the fact that her brother is dead.

[leximutia]

The reveal at the end was very well done. A short read but a creepy and effective horror story!

[Drakka Reader]

Oooh, a story that starts already scary, then delves into horror! A great story, though I feel it would be easier to read if you separated ideas into paragraphs.

[maryam_05]

So captivating and engages the reader. left me unsure and on edge til the end. Very enjoyable.

[Alice Heritage]

Wow! Congratulations on a masterful ending.

[diana03monroy]

woow very good work of the writer and author, interesting, creepy, chilling, scary, as the brother does not say anything to his parents because it is if brother even if afraid to kill him, it is somewhat confusing but good story

[MJ Oluwasegun]

Woah... I love it. First I think I get your perspective as I was thinking of Mental illness. This is a very dulcet work that van be let out.
It's applaudable.

[Jacktone Ogada]

Hm! An imaginary brother! Very creative! I loved this.

[Jacktone Ogada]

But I don't see the need of the label "very short story." It is still a short story after all!

[Jacktone Ogada]

So captivating and engages the reader. left me unsure and on edge til the end. Very enjoyable.

Sure! I got angry why he finished the story.

[Jacktone Ogada]

Oooh, a story that starts already scary, then delves into horror! A great story, though I feel it would be easier to read if you separated ideas into paragraphs.

I would rather call it a thriller. But horror may be another genre it almost perfectly fits in.

[Jacktone Ogada]

loved the story, racy, intriguing. however i would have loved it if the author had ended the story with the fact that her brother is dead.

I don't think so. It is more cool to just let the brother be a mystery.

[Sumansona1344]

Oh My God! I did not see that coming at all. I loved how you wrote that. I wish I could write like that too. The story and the style fits perfectly with each other. It seemed so real that I was in shock at the end.