Passionate LOVE on fire -- part II

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"PASSIONATE LOVE ON FIRE -- PART II"
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As the two bumps to each other and arguing, some of jiro's fun are not happy on what happening between the two.

Jiro; (annoyed) seriously don't show your face in front of my handsome face again!
Clara; (shocked) what!? Its YOU who should not show your self!! Arggggg!!

Then the two parted away from each other with the feeling of being annoyed.
As the class is on going, Clara run an errand for her science teacher to get reports. And there she saw a beautiful man reading a book. Seeing the man as someone like a prince from a fantacy word.

????? ; excuse me! Can I help you with something?
Clara; (blushed) oh! Ahhh! Sorry! I need the report that Mr.Helmin forgot at his table.
????? ; was it this?
Clara; yes! Thank you.

As Clara goes taking her leave, she goes back and ask.

Clara; ca..can I have your name!?
????? ; its Angelo, class 2-3 nice to meet you (smiling).
Clara ; (blushing) yes its nice to meet you too!! My name is Clara. Bye see 'ya around. (Runs)

As Clara is leaving, Angelo keeps smiling beautifully like he saw a cute little kitten that going to be eaten.
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Okay guys that's for today hope you like the part two! I'll update it again tomorrow so stay tuned.
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