Ants: A Letter to the Landlord

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Re: Ants: A Letter to the Landlord

Post by Mrs shehzad » 29 Apr 2018, 06:12

Wow , its really a good humorous stuff .. these ants are really a part of our lives and specially our apartments 😜 ..I hope u will be comfortable with them soon 😂 ..

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Post by Beth470 » 29 Apr 2018, 11:46

Interesting story, but I know ants can get to be a problem.

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Post by Bianka Walter » 01 May 2018, 14:59

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Gave me a good chuckle. Thanks for sharing :)
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Post by lydiasmoot21 » 02 May 2018, 22:33

This is a creative way of writing a complaint letter.

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Post by JayJoseph » 05 May 2018, 10:40

I was feeling a little bit sad. But this was just what I needed. This is awesomely funny and entertaining.

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Post by Tehilah27 » 23 May 2018, 05:20

There are very few things I love above sarcasm and your writeup had me in stitches, love it! Perhaps liberating your wallet isn't sufficient, shouldn't your co-tenants be asked to split the rent?

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Post by Ayyatullah » 15 Jun 2018, 15:08

It wounderful

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Post by April Gay » 17 Jun 2018, 01:55

Now there's one humorous way to appeal. It's amazing to some people to find humor amidst being pestered. Indeed it's true, there's always a bright side to everything.

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Post by ccranston » 05 Jul 2018, 20:06

Such a clever and humorous letter. Thanks for the laugh!
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Post by palilogy » 07 Jul 2018, 12:01

I love the cucumber - such a good scene.
I wish you delivered the letter slower - stayed in each moment and teased it out more =)

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Post by Lottie_Elsie » 17 Sep 2018, 14:56

I so much enjoyed reading this piece. Great job!

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