Eighteen And Twenty-three

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Ayobami Kehinde
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Eighteen And Twenty-three

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I got asked by someone at work today, "How old are you, 21?"
I looked at him, laughing with my eyes and heart, and replied, "I think I'm twelve years old".
"21?" He repeated and I gave him the same answer.
Then he said, "No, 12, no, maybe 18." I chuckled and told him I'm much older than that.
So he made another guess. "23, you must be 23."
"Oh, wow, so I look 18 and 23?" He said yes and asked if I'm married to which I answered no. I let him know I am much older than 23, but he wouldn't believe.
Well, I know, I actually look 18 and 23. =D =D =D

©2014, Ayobami Temitope Kehinde
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Very interesting story!
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TheRavensWoods wrote:Very interesting story!
Thank you! :D
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You actually look 23 not 18.. But 12 is a NO NO
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