Hi SilviaP21, and thank you for responding to my story; also, I see that you are new to the forums so let me be among the first to welcome you.SilviaP21 wrote:It is such a nice story. I loved reading it and actually felt kind of sad to get to the end. I was hoping for something more but I guess the way it ended was perfect.
Several people have responded to the end of my story much as you have. The key to the ending of the story only works if the reader knows who the deceased woman refers to in Real-Life. If you know who Eleanor Rigby is you will find that the story does go on beyond the written ending I have provided.
This puts me in a somewhat awkward position when responding to reader posts because I don't know if the "something more" that readers often expect includes the knowledge of who the deceased actually is or not.
But thank you all the same for responding, and, once again, WELCOME to the forums. [:- )