Lonely People

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Re: Lonely People

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Very special story!! So well written. Took me a minute and then I had to look up the words to the song again. I love stories that give you a mental image that stays with you. Thanks for sharing it.
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RachelEmmanuel wrote: 14 Jul 2020, 17:41 Very special story!! So well written. Took me a minute and then I had to look up the words to the song again. I love stories that give you a mental image that stays with you. Thanks for sharing it.
Many thanks for your comment. This one was fun to write. People seemed to like it too which always makes me feel good in the sense that I haven't wasted their time when they read it.
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I am honestly not attempting to bump this story, but I just found an exceptionally fine amateur cover of the song that inspired this story and wanted to share it with those who are familiar with the song.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eT98yd8 ... rnerGuitar
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