6 Word Story

Use this forum to post short stories that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links.
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Re: 6 Word Story

Post by Reader Robin » 28 Feb 2019, 17:26

Tehilah27 wrote:
23 May 2018, 07:26
Running father, laughing mother, burning car
I want to read the rest of this story as soon as possible!

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Post by amsula_2018 » 10 Mar 2019, 01:03

The cat became sad when the mouse escaped.

You should write children's book.
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Post by nooregano » 19 Mar 2019, 12:29

Interesting effect! I started to feel bad for the cat even though the mouse is the "protagonist."
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Post by 0017meow » 20 Mar 2019, 06:38

Crying together, laughing together, dying together

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Post by mermaidshell83 » 26 Apr 2019, 10:13

Quiet, peaceful, a dead bird. Ah one sentence wonders.. I made that up. My sister used to own a white parrot that made the sound of a fire alarm with a dead battery...lol..true story...also said carbon monoxide...lol...I hated that bird!

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Post by DC Brown » 29 Apr 2019, 20:40

Queen Arthur wrote:
26 Feb 2019, 19:36
I came, I saw, I conquered.

Okay...that's NOT original. 😆
Good one! It does tell a story in 6 words. Someone else's six words, but six words nonetheless!! Quotes can be good...

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Post by Artizi » 12 May 2019, 09:51

Swore eternal love. He was lying.

Love this tiny little 6 words stories :)
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Post by Artizi » 16 May 2019, 07:56

Mana_Hale wrote:
07 Apr 2018, 15:29
CambaReviewer wrote:
04 Apr 2018, 12:15
This could be a writing prompt. Nice. You have created images in my head with six words. Bravo!
Thanks! I love working with super short stories like this, I find it helps writers of all experience levels realize how little is truly necessary to make a good story :)
I agree, this can make for such an entertaining writing exercise!
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Post by Moodykelz_10 » 25 Aug 2019, 15:51

I love this idea of this writing prompt.....

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Post by LyorBoone » 27 Sep 2019, 18:37

Missing person. A letter. Awful News.
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Post by kathey » 12 Nov 2019, 11:01

I loved him, he loved another.

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Post by kathey » 12 Nov 2019, 11:03

I wanted a baby, he didn't.

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Post by raquel_frescia » 02 Dec 2019, 17:25

Mana_Hale wrote:
02 Apr 2018, 21:39
The mouse evaded the starving cat.
Loved it!

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Post by DATo » 11 Dec 2019, 05:59

Then second mouse gets the cheese.
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Post by BookPower9 » Today, 02:28

Well, it's very nice. Maybe I can add input when you start writing it.

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