Breakfast
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- umair_villanio
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Breakfast
Into his cup
He put milk
In hus cup of coffee
He put sugar
In his cup of coffee and milk
With his teaspoon
He stirred it
He drank the coffe and milk
And he put down the cup
Without speaking to me
- MCL1744
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"Without speaking to me" and in the fact that the line is delivered at the end
I think this is well done - because it isn't just simple there is a twist =)
- TaaraLynn
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I agree. He/she is watching and waiting for the other to acknowledge their presence. But then I'm like, "Why didn't you say anything either?!" See, I'm way too into it, it's not so simple. What happens? Why are they not speaking? What's the relationship?
I get way too involved.
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