Official Review: Time Before Time by Paul F. Lenzi

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Official Review: Time Before Time by Paul F. Lenzi

Post by Miriam Molina » 22 Dec 2017, 17:44

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Time Before Time" by Paul F. Lenzi.]
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4 out of 4 stars
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Words are fraught with power untold;
This we know from books we behold.
But never is such power so strong
Than when unleashed in poem or song!

The chapbook Time Before Time: Units of When by Paul F. Lenzi inspired that simple quatrain from my poetic bosom. I do spout poetry once in a while and thought myself equal to facing this book. Unprepared, I was not. Here's how to read this book: One, have an unabridged dictionary and Google at the ready. Two, set aside many hours of silent concentration. Three, allow yourself to bask in Lenzi’s heartfelt poesy.

You will encounter 56 poems (55 by Lenzi and one by Yeats), all of them works of vivid imagery. Lenzi’s “Syntax” defines how to enjoy poetry - “guided by feeling/ without need of knowing.” There are no right or wrong interpretations. The shortest poems are three-liner haiku (four of them); the longest (“This Thing of Ours,” a free-form, free-verse piece) has 67 lines. Lenzi declares the central theme as time; it was a challenge to find time in all the verses. Then it dawned on me: everything under the sun is a function of time! The poems crudely fall into various sub-themes: e.g., growing-old time, getting-sick time, olden times (history), travel time, and even cooking time and chow time.

Next to the Preface, the book features “The Second Coming,” an oft-quoted poem by William Yeats and a personal favorite of Lenzi. It was written in 1919 in the aftermath of World War I, the Easter Rising and the Russian Revolution. All three are world events that shaped history and yes, time. If I had my way, I would have included Ecclesiastes 3:1-8 (saying there is a time for everything) from the Bible.

The author seems to have a poem for everything. He takes you to Pisa’s “Leaning Tower,” to the mythical world of Arabian “Ubar,” out in space to the red dwarf star “Barnard’s Star,” and inside the sterile walls of an operating room in “Under the Knife.” He bathes you with the wonders of “Midsummer” and extols the beauty of “Leaves.” You meet the young generation in “Snowflakes” and feel the author’s distaste for “A Secular Sect” (the members of Congress) and the “Vermin” of Washington. You ache for those afflicted with “Sciaticam Vehementem” and “ALS” and pity the frail aging in “Sad the Surprise.” You chuckle as you read about a cherished pen (“Meisterstuck”) and the fake nose of Danish astronomer “Tycho.” From now on, thanks to Lenzi, I will await the rain for petrichor and salute my country’s pennon.

There is so much to learn from the man. That is no wonder as Lenzi was schooled in Philosophy, Ethics, and Political Science. He now lives in quaint New Hampshire with his wife of 48 years and boasts of three children and eleven grandchildren. Now past middle age, he suffers the occasional pains and takes the mandatory maintenance drugs. Imagine all the inspiration his experiences (joys, successes, sufferings, worries, etc.) afford him. He has been writing poetry since he retired (as Insurance executive) fourteen years ago, with almost four thousand poems to his credit. (In fact, this is his twenty-second book and the fifth chapbook.) He is a member of various poet societies, a stalwart of Poets for Peace, and a multi-awarded blogger.

In the Preface, Lenzi tells us that he writes in “free form, free verse style, without regard for rules of punctuation, grammar or format.” Indeed, only proper nouns are capitalized, and you see no periods or commas cluttering his verses. This freedom of style adds to the challenge of reading the poems (remember the silent concentration I advised). There are a couple of non-distracting typos: e.g., “Washington” not capitalized, “Johannes Kepler” called “Johan” (his nickname?), and “into to the mists.” But I cannot be sure they are unintended, owing to his heads-up about disregarding rules and the proverbial poetic license. They are much too few and trivial to matter, anyway.

I followed most poems to his blog (Poesy plus Polemics: Words of Wisdom, Worry and Whimsy) and found a work of art (a painting, sculpture, poster, etc., from another artist) accompanying each poem. I only wish those, too, were included in the book; they definitely enhanced my reading pleasure.

I also believe that an index will bolster the book’s likability. There is no apparent order in the presentation of the poems. An alphabetical index of the topics and themes (hashtags in our modern times) at the end of the book would allow readers to quickly navigate to their areas of interest.

I cannot help but give this packed volume 4 out of 4 stars. This book is meant to be savored slowly, bit by precious bit. The wealth of knowledge that I gained is priceless. The emotional highs (and lows) I experienced are memorable. There is lively humor in there, too. I was challenged, I was touched, and I had a great time. I will count this book among my favorites.

Those who wish to enrich their vocabulary, experience soulful poetry and marvel at the vastness of time will do well to get acquainted with this collection. For those who will explore Time Before Time, I offer this advice. Take your time.

“quantum vacuum / mathematically moribund/ paradox of a particulate God/ life and matter ex nihilo"
- Excerpt from “Time Before Time,” title piece by Paul F. Lenzi

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Post by Sahani Nimandra » 23 Dec 2017, 10:52

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Post by Miriam Molina » 23 Dec 2017, 10:57

Thanks, Sahani Nimandra! I hope you can also experience Lenzi's poems one of these days.

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Post by kandscreeley » 23 Dec 2017, 11:22

Well, I'm not much into poetry in the first place. Then, it seems that this book might be a little too much for me. I don't have hours of silence to devote to this book. Thanks for the review, though. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Post by Miriam Molina » 23 Dec 2017, 11:30

I understand, Kandscreely. The man is a philosopher. His poetry is demanding. But I was glad for the experience. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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Post by Vickie Noel » 23 Dec 2017, 11:38

Wow, Miriam, this review though! I was totally blown away, not so much as to the material, but by the way you constructed everything. I like poems, their imagery and word pictures but this one seems rather tough (and rich!) I'm kinda on the fence here, but kudos to the powerful review :D :tiphat:
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Post by MsTri » 23 Dec 2017, 14:30

I liked your starting poem, there, a lot! :-)

I saw this book and totally thought about reviewing it since I love time, but another book had my interest more, so I didn't. I'm glad to know it was a great read, after all, so I'll probably purchase a copy at some point.

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Post by Miriam Molina » 23 Dec 2017, 17:43

Thanks so much, Vickie Noel and MsTri! You are most kind with your appreciation. Merry Christmas!

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Post by Akamani » 26 Dec 2017, 10:26

I like the book its nice

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Post by Miriam Molina » 26 Dec 2017, 12:15

Hi, Akamani! I hope you have a great time with the poems.

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Post by ParadoxicalWoman » 30 Dec 2017, 08:44

At the starting of reading your review, Ecclesiastes 3 comes to mind. I'm glad you point that out and I'm amazed by your in-depth review. I will need to have more free time with silence to be able to savour this book.
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Post by Miriam Molina » 30 Dec 2017, 15:21

Yay, ParadoxicalWoman, we both love Ecclesiastes!

Thanks for reading and commenting. Hope someday you'll find time for Lenzi's poetry. You can always go to his blog for a sample or two.

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Post by adexade73 » 05 Jan 2018, 05:20

I'm glad you point that out and I'm amazed by your in-depth review.

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Post by quizoneka » 05 Jan 2018, 07:02

Beautiful 💙

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Post by Miriam Molina » 05 Jan 2018, 15:45

@Adexade73
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Thank you so much for your appreciation! I hope you also get to enjoy Lenzi.

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