Official Review: Rhyme of the Ancient Hipster

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Re: Official Review: Rhyme of the Ancient Hipster

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Thank you very much!
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That was a very honest review. Considering the misspelled words, grammatical errors and lack of cohesion, I believe the rate is justified.
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Thank you. :tiphat: I did my best to be fair and honest.
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The title of the book sounded really interesting, however it seems as if it does not live up to its name. Thanks for the good review.

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Sadly, I agree.

Thank you for the kind words.
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Although the review was quite bad, I may consider reading it to verify it for myself. Most people who write poetry, usually write what they see, feel, and experienced. I can't image it being as bad as the reviewer stated. "I hope"
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I agree that you may see it differently and I truly hope that you get more out of it than I did. Thanks for the feedback!
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I just read the sample, you were right. I am at a complete lost. :(
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It was definitely hard for me to get into as well.
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Post by Booky_BettyC »

Very honest and somewhat funny review! Definitely made it known that author needs to work on his poetry and made it light heartedly so. Hope your next read is what you're looking for.
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Okay, so besides Erotica, I adore poetry. And I know there are many forms of it, I just couldn't quite get a grip on the sample, so the book would be a complete no, no.
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I also hope that you find an upcoming book of poetry that you enjoy, Terrylynsmith! 8)

And thank you Booky_BettyC for the comments on the review as well! :)
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I feel like a bad editor can make or break a work of literature. I'm glad that these particular poems had positive factors to help outweigh the bad.
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Editors are definitely a great help to any author. A different perspective and guidance are things that often get overlooked in writing.
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That is so true! I hope that your next reading experience is a better one.
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