Official Review: The Love You Find by Kandace Elmergreen

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Official Review: The Love You Find by Kandace Elmergreen

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Love You Find" by Kandace Elmergreen.]
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3 out of 4 stars
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The Love You Find is Book 2 of a romance trilogy by Kandace Elmergreen.

Growing up on a ranch with older brothers, Mia learned from an early age to not only be a brilliant horsewoman, but to also be stubborn, determined and strong minded as well. Her parents are at a loss as to how to control her and take her to the ranch of her father’s best friend, Like the Wind, in the hope that romance will settle her down a bit. When sparks fly between her and Like the Wind’s sons, a new kind of trouble arises.

The two brothers, Luke and Cliff, both battle for Mia’s attention. Escalating quickly, the tension between the two threatens to tear the family apart, but when Luke is mistaken for Cliff and kidnapped by Mexican bandits, his whole outlook on life changes. Can they rescue Luke in time and can Cliff come clean about his past and earn forgiveness from his family, especially Luke?

Set in both New Mexico and Mexico, the story travels from one extreme to the next in this dashing rescue adventure. Written in third person, the story shows the different characters and the challenges which they have to face. Mia, determined to not be pigeon holed as the weak girl, has to start to come to grips with her feminine side and newly discovered feelings of love. Like the Wind has lost sight of the man he was and, after a spiritual quest, he realizes he has to set his life on the right path again if he is going to be able to rescue his son. Luke and Cliff have both been caught up in the suffocating roles of eldest and middle son with seemingly no way to break the mold or choose their own future.

Of all the characters, I enjoyed the strong female role of Mia the most. I liked how outspoken she was, as well as her development into a woman in love without losing the strong minded aspects of herself, which is sometimes seen in romance novels.

The story covers a lot of ground in its 463 pages, however, at times I felt the pace dragging and the writing somewhat stilted which affected the overall flow of the story. There was also no indication of when in time the book was set. I began with assuming it was set in modern times until a phrase about Mia being unladylike and deciding to wear trousers had everyone in shock, that I realised that this was not the case. It was a bit confusing not being able to pinpoint a time reference, as it would have clarified things early on.

Even though this book is part of a series, it is a stand-alone book in itself. Only slight references are made to the previous book, which followed the story of Like the Wind and Blake, Mia’s father, while this one focuses on the next generation.

Overall I enjoyed this story but due to the slow pace of writing, I rate it 3 out of 4 stars. Any reader who enjoys romance with a western aspect will like this book. It has it all; action, adventure, kidnapping, horse chases, explosions, lost treasure, deceit, love and redemption all thrown in together, as well as a spiritual animal guide for protection.

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Sounds like a solid story, I like all the elements you mentioned. Thanks for the great review.
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Great review, mico. Too bad that such a nice book has no time reference...Maybe I'll wait around a bit.
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Post by Jeremie Mondejar »

I enjoyed the strong female role of Mia the most.

I like to read a book when it comes to a strong role of female. A woman having a strong personality is rare. Beautiful review. Thanks for that. I learn something new. :D
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Jem Tomarong wrote:I enjoyed the strong female role of Mia the most.

I like to read a book when it comes to a strong role of female. A woman having a strong personality is rare. Beautiful review. Thanks for that. I learn something new. :D
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I do enjoy a good, strong female lead. It's too bad the pace dragged at some points. Thanks for the review. I don't think this one is for me, but I liked your review.
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when a writer writes about two men who are fighting for the love of one woman, the story line is bound to be interesting. I live that this book has this kind of storyline and other twists and turns. thanks for the good
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Post by MrsCatInTheHat »

I enjoy historical fiction but haven't read very much westerns in that genre. This one sounds like it might interest me, especially with a strong female lead. I'd also love to know more about the culture behind the spiritual animal guide. I'm assuming that is Native American in origin?
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This definitely sounds like something I'd love to read, but the amount of pages isn't an advantage. I'm afraid the author dragged the story, just like you mentioned, which is such an unnecessary thing. Still, the summary looks promising. Thanks for the review!
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Books in this genre often attract a reading from me. Mia's strong character makes the book even more attractive as the plot moves from Mexico to New Mexico. The review is nicely done.
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Two brothers seeking the attention of a single girl? Seems an interesting read.
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