Official Review: African Venus by Sheryl Carkhum-Lord

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Official Review: African Venus by Sheryl Carkhum-Lord

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[Following is the official OnlineBookClub.org review of "African Venus" by Sheryl Carkhum-Lord.]
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3 out of 4 stars
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African Venus by Sheryl Carkhum-Lord is a historical fiction novella centered around a sculpture made in 1851 by Charles Henri Joseph Cordier. The scuplture, depicting the beauty of an African woman, caused quite a stir in its day. Slavery and racism were alive and well in that time and many people criticized Cordier for making a scuplture of an African woman. However, the sculpture captured the positive attention of many famous people such as Queen Victoria, Samuel Colt, George Elliot, and Charles Darwin. It was first called, “The Bust of an African Woman”. Later on, the sculpture became known as “The African Venus”.

Not much is actually known about the woman behind “The African Venus”. This book serves to give you her story. She is a young African princess, named Nima, stolen away from her home by the French. The story follows her journey from princess to slave to the circumstances leading her to be sculpted by Cordier.

I had never heard of this sculpture before reading this book. I think it is a clever idea for a historical book and it works well. The author did a good job creating a story that is both interesting and educational. I found Nima's story to be very believable even though no one actually knows anything about the woman in the sculpture.

The story is a fast-paced and easy read. It is only about 40 pages long and can be read in one sitting. It is well-written and I did not notice any grammatical or typographical errors. However, there were one or two times when I was confused by the wording. It did not bother me too much, but enough to make me stop and try to figure out what the author meant.

Personally, I found it hard to connect with the characters. It is such a short story that you are mostly given events rather than the emotions or thoughts of the characters. I wish I could have delved deeper into what Nima was thinking and feeling. There is a little said on that, but I think it could have been developed more.

I give African Venus 3 out of 4 stars. I like that it is a very unique story. I enjoyed learning about this piece of history. If it had a little more to it or something to help me connect to the characters, I would easily give it 4 stars. However, I think people who enjoy short historical stories will find this to be a wonderful book.

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Great review! The plot seems very creative.
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Thanks! Yes it is creative :)
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Thanks for the review. I love the historical aspect of the story. I'll probably do a little reading/research about this.
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Thanks for this review.
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Good review! The book sounds quite interesting.
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Thanks everyone for taking the time to read my review!
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This sounds like another book that I would like to read. I found out that I enjoy history so much better when it is in story form like this rather than just dry facts. I had never heard of this sculpture either, but it sounds like the model for it had a hard but very interesting life. Good review!
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I agree Amheiser! It's so much easier to learn history in story form!
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For enjoyment, I also prefer to read historical fiction books over history books most times, then I also appreciate it when a historical fiction author notes what factual changes, omissions, or additions he or she made, in the back of the book. Good review!
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NadineTimes10 wrote:For enjoyment, I also prefer to read historical fiction books over history books most times, then I also appreciate it when a historical fiction author notes what factual changes, omissions, or additions he or she made, in the back of the book. Good review!
I also like it when the author explains what changes/additions are made. I hate wondering how much of what I read is true or false! That is one area this book could improve as I had to look it up for myself to see how much of it was historically accurate.
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Nice review! This sounds really intriguing.
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Thanks TammyO, I thought so too :)
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Never heard of this sculpture either. Does it really exist? Nice, easy-flowing review though. I've come across a few good novellas this year; hope this is one of them.
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Really nice review!
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