Official Review: Ralphie the Roach by Raymond Sobrino Jr.

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Official Review: Ralphie the Roach by Raymond Sobrino Jr.

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Ralphie the Roach" by Raymond Sobrino Jr..]
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2 out of 4 stars
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Ralphie, a little roach, did not know that others saw him as ugly and dirty. Also, he had no idea that his home was dark and greasy, it was the only home he had ever known. Author Raymond Sobrino Jr. tells the story of Ralphie and the lessons that he learns in Ralphie the Roach.

Ralphie came home from school crying. His concerned parents rushed to console Ralphie and find out what caused his sadness. Henry, a big and mean honey bee, told Ralphie that no one liked him because he and his home were ugly and dirty. The bully also said that everyone loved bees because bees spent most of their time around flowers. Everyone loves flowers. Ralphie and his parents have a serious talk about what is truly important and the proper way to treat other bugs.

The purpose and themes in this book are clear and presented in a fun and understandable way. Children respond very well to fables, and many children love insects and small creatures. Kindness to others and self-confidence are lessons that should be taught time and time again. Most children are unaware of perceived flaws until a bully painfully makes them aware. This story teaches an anti-bullying lesson by appealing to the reader’s empathy.

There are no grammatical errors throughout the text. The story is told with simple language making it a book that children as young as two-years-old would enjoy. The story comfortably flows from one scene to the next making it pleasant to read. However, I believe that there is a serious error concerning the name of the honey bee character. His name is Henry when he is introduced, but Harry speaks in the same conversation with no introduction. I am not sure if these are two different characters or one and the same.

Illustrations are a vital part of any children’s book. The illustrations fell short in this book. It is difficult to make out what is in the first picture. Furthermore, all of the pictures are black and white. This story would benefit from bright and colorful pictures.

I rate this book 2 out of 4 stars. There is great potential here. The author shows a clear understanding of the importance of teaching children to be kind to one another. The lessons in this book are presented in an engaging and understandable way. Unfortunately, the pictures and character name confusion take away from this book. Still, reading this story with or to young children will help start important conversations about kindness and self-confidence.

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Post by Sahani Nimandra »

I agree on the rating with you. Colorful illustrations are a gateway to the children's hearts. I hope the author makes these changes in the future. Thank you for your review!
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Post by MsTri »

It's a shame about the pictures, but do we really want "cute" pictures of roaches? Also, it IS a great lesson, and I applaud the author for writing it, but roaches? Ugh! As someone who was plagued with them in my home years ago, I just cannot be empathetic of them, cartoon or not.
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Post by Catevanne22 »

I enjoyed your review of this children's book. The choice of a roach as the main character is smart, being that many people loathe this insect. The story reminds me of a children's book from long ago called The Ugly Duckling which teaches a similar lesson. And since anti-bullying is a theme very much on parent's minds these days I hope the message will get through to kids.
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Post by Nmesoma »

Seems like a great way to teach children not to judge things because of their outward appearance; a lot of potential actually lay on the inside, I mean I don't think Bill Gates became the richest man on earth by being handsome or nick-knack. And as for the cockroaches, I've seen my little siblings watching Robo-roach and if that don't kill them, this one won't either. Great review by the way, loved it!
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Post by Cecilia_L »

Using a roach as a character is a creative way to teach not to judge by outward appearances and I'm sure it's more appreciated by children than I can as an adult. Thanks for your thoughtful review.
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Post by Marissa Michael »

I'm not sure if I will read a story about a roach being bullied but still I can't deny the creativity of the author in writing this story. I will have to pass this one. Thank you for your review.
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Post by LaurenHaupt »

I like the theme to the story. I think stories like these can help children. Pictures should be improved. One name for a honey bee should be enough.
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Post by kfwilson6 »

Great lessons. The title would be a huge turnoff for me. I wouldn't want this book in my house.

I would have anticipated colored images. Disappointing...
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Post by julessawyer »

It's actually true, children rarely see the negative about themselves unless point out by others. I felt too bad about the book's illustration. The themes and creative used of insects are already great but if the illustration is lame then conveying the message particularly to the target audience also failed.
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