Official Review: The Mystery of the Hidden Cabin

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Official Review: The Mystery of the Hidden Cabin

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Mystery of the Hidden Cabin" by M.E. Hembroff.]
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4 out of 4 stars
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The Mystery of the Hidden Cabin is a children’s book by M.E. Hembroff. The story, which is set in 1954, follows Bess Silver and her friends as they try to unravel an old mystery in their small town.

After losing her father in a car accident, and recently recovering from polio herself, Bess moves to a new town with her mother. The pair hopes to get a fresh start. At first, Bess isn’t entirely sure about Pineview, although she soon makes friends with some girls her own age. After her best friend and cousin Megan moves to town with her own family, Bess feels more secure and begins to settle into life in a new place. Adjusting to a new school and life without her father, Bess has a lot on her mind. Soon she has even more to contemplate when a mystery pops up in Megan’s home.

Renovating their new house, Megan’s father discovers a tiny cabin comprised of one room, right behind the walls of their home. Among the few items left behind is an old diary. Bess begins to spend her free time reading through the old entries, dated at the beginning of the 1900s. She becomes fascinated with the accounts of a young couple embarking on a new life together on the “wild frontier.” Soon, Bess becomes consumed with unraveling the mystery of the author of the diary. Who was she? What became of her and her young family? Bess is determined to find out.

The Mystery of the Hidden Cabin is a very charming, enjoyable book. It is aimed at middle-grade readers and seems very appropriate for that age. The story explores a lot of what life was like for Bess living in a small town. She attends school in a one-room schoolhouse, with one teacher who presides over 25 students from first to eighth grade. There are fun, simple activities that the children all attend together such as nature walks, wiener roasts, and sleigh rides. I think many children would love to read about these things and learn how school in the 50s was different from today.

As for the mystery itself, it wasn’t all that mysterious. I enjoyed reading the excerpts from the pioneer family’s diary, which were nicely paralleled with the diary that Bess kept about her own life. Although Bess has many dreams about the mystery woman, I thought there would be more of a paranormal presence. From the description, I thought it might be a ghost story. Most of the mystery involves Bess doing extensive research as she tries to track down the history of cabin’s original residents.

I enjoyed the story a great deal. As a child, I loved reading stories that took place decades before, sort of the junior version of historical fiction. I liked hearing about more simple times and seeing how the character’s lives were so different from my own. The story was sweet and the author has a very pleasant, engaging writing style. The characters were fun, particularly the identical twin boys that arrive at school partway through the year, and prove to be a mischievous pair. I think almost any child from 9-12 or so would enjoy reading this light mystery.

I awarded The Mystery of the Hidden Cabin 4 out of 4 stars. Even as an adult, I was absorbed in the story and was curious to find out who the owner of the diary was and what became of her. I think children would be equally engaged and will like hearing about life in the 50s, as well as the hardships of frontier living in the early 1900s.

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Sounds like a good book. I want to know what happened now after reading your review. Great review!
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“Charming” is a great word to describe this story. I’d like to read it myself! Thanks for a great review!
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Post by Sahani Nimandra »

Sounds like a lively read. When I read your review I couldn't help but wonder if there was unusual incidents that occurred in the story. Certain points questioned me like, was the diary left on purpose? Is it a haunting read? Did the girl get obsessed with that diary? Was there a happy ending? Such questions popped into my mind. I wonder of its outcome. Thank you for your review!
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Post by shieramaemdamiles »

Sounds like a good book to read for my nephew. Thank you so much!
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I also like hearing and reading stories from the past when it is more simple and happier times. I think this is a children's book adults like me will enjoy as well.
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Post by Mercymax »

Though the genre targets young children it is enjoyable to read it. Bess has an adult mind therefore everyone can be fascinated to read the book. Nice preview
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I dont exactly know why but ive never been a fan of books set in "the old days". I prefer i suppose books set in modern time or more so in the future. I guess im more of a fantasy thriller person so this book wouldnt be for me. However i may recommend it to my daughter who is only 9 but reads at a much higher level. I appriciated your very thorough review of the book.
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Post by MsTri »

I saw this book and started to read it, so I'm glad my initial instinct was dead-on, though I too thought it was more of a ghost story. One thing confuses me, though; if her father died in a car crash before the move, how did her father renovate the new place? *scratches head*
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Your review made me think of the kind of mystery books I enjoyed as a girl. Sounds like a great read--thanks for the memories!
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Post by Marissa Michael »

This will be a great read to me. I'm jealous at Bess for being able to read an old diary set in 1900s. 1 question: Did Bess keep the old diary to herself?

The title itself is intriguing to me. Thank you for your good review.
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Am captivated already and I will make sure my nephew read and enjoy it...
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When I read this book's description, I thought there would be more of a paranormal aspect, too, but it sounds like the absence of that doesn't mean that the book isn't a good read. From reading your wonderful review, I'm curious to read this one myself! Thanks.
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I don't know why but I always enjoy stories that involve long-lost diaries. My favorite parts of those books are reading the excerpts from the diaries. This sounds like a fun read. You have me intrigued about the diary as well.
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kfwilson6 wrote: 27 Jun 2018, 20:45 I don't know why but I always enjoy stories that involve long-lost diaries. My favorite parts of those books are reading the excerpts from the diaries. This sounds like a fun read. You have me intrigued about the diary as well.
That is indeed the intriguing part of this story. I also like reading such long-lost written works. It provides satisfaction to reader's curiosity and imagination.
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