Official Review: The Little Witch by Ronald Craig

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Official Review: The Little Witch by Ronald Craig

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Little Witch" by Ronald Craig.]
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2 out of 4 stars
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It’s no secret that most children love magical stories. There is just something special about reading about the extraordinary that entrances young readers and makes them wish they had magical powers too! In Ronald Craig’s The Little Witch and the Lost Boy, young readers will get the chance to satisfy their cravings for both magic and adventure!

In the story, readers are introduced to a young witch named Sophina, who comes from a mysterious family in England. Together with her owl friend, Toots, Sophina finds herself in all kinds of situations. One day she is given a mission from the “Order of the Feathers” to investigate the disappearance of Toot’s famous grandfather. Along the way, many family secrets start to come to light and she meets Dillwyn, a boy whose family disappeared after their encounter with the “Red Witch.” Now Sophina has to figure out how to help her friends and protect herself from the dark forces that are trying to stand in her way.

The Little Witch and the Lost Boy is available in audio book form, print or digitally. The audio book is read by Colin Cassidy who is a voiceover producer. His voice perfectly complements the story. He reads in a clear and captivating way that really draws readers to the story. In fact, his reading of the book makes the plot more exciting and less confusing than if a reader were to read the book digitally or in print.

Although I enjoyed Cassidy’s voiceover and Craig’s cover illustration, the book has quite a few negatives. One of the biggest negatives was the plot of the book. The plot was rushed and perplexed. It constantly jumped from one scene to another without any significant development. In the story, there were too many main plots. The story starts off with one plot about the disappearance of Toot’s grandfather and then quickly jumps to Dillwyn’s story. After that, it jumps again to another plot with no development to the first two. I found myself struggling to stay interested in the story.

Another negative was with the protagonist, Sophina. The author constantly refers to her as a strong-willed and brave girl, but there is nothing in the book that truly demonstrates those attributes. Also, in children’s books, it is important for the young protagonist to do things on their own without an adult’s help or presence. In Sophina’s case, everything that she did was by the instruction of an adult or an older figure. There wasn’t a single thing she did solely of her own will and curiosity. She’s a character that young readers will have a hard time connecting with.

I rate this book 2 out of 4 stars. I gave it two stars because of Colin Cassidy’s voiceover and Craig’s beautiful cover illustration. I can’t award anymore because of the confusing plot and the protagonist. If the book were longer and properly developed its plots, I would give it another star. If Sophina was relatable and more independent, that would be a star as well. Unfortunately, for now, two stars is the highest I can rate this book.

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I enjoyed your review. Pity about the problems with the book, especially when it's one for kids. They should really have only the best of the best.
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This sounds like it had potential, but it just wasn't realized. It's too bad. Thanks for the review, though.
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As usual, such an insightful review! Thank you for sharing. Too bad the plot is rushed, that's always a damper on my reading experience!
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Thank you for reading, everyone!! ????
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I think the cover is really well done too. It's really too bad that Sophina wasn't a strong character and that there were too many plots. It definitely has potential.
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Snowflake wrote:I think the cover is really well done too. It's too bad the story wasn't. It's really too bad that Sophina wasn't a strong character and that there were too many plots. It definitely has potential.
It does, hopefully the author will rework the story a little.

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Thanks for the review. It sounds like the book has a lot of potential. Hopefully the author can do some editing and some plot adjustments.
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I believe a children's book is the hardest to write. You have to be mature enough to know how to write it and childlike enough to know how to read it.

Thanks, Amagine, for introducing this new witch! It's only too bad she has a long way to go to be at par with Hermione.
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Thank you for reading! ??
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This is a beautiful ,well written review. Reviewer has realistically described the pros and cons of the book. I agree with the reviewer that protagonist character in children's books should be a guiding star for children.
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Thanks for the insightful review. I really love adventure books but not if the plot is messy and rushed.
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Thank you for reading! ??
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I generally like such books but your rating is making me think again.
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Thanks for reading! ?
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