Official Review: The Gnomes in the Trees by C.L. Collyer

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Official Review: The Gnomes in the Trees by C.L. Collyer

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[Following is the official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Gnomes in the Trees" by C.L. Collyer.]
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Who doesn't love gnomes?! I adore gnomes and was very happy to see a short story on them. The Gnomes in the trees is a delightful children’s picture book by C.L. Collyer suitable for children ages 3 through 8.

This is a cute story about friendship, gnomes, and magic. Jacky Foster lives in a farm with his parents, his sister Josie, and his faithful dog Sparky. At Jacky's eighth birthday party, an incredible thing occurs. A statue of gnome comes alive and asks Jacky to help his family who live in a faraway land. Jacky agrees and goes off with his dog to save the day.

This charming picture book caught my eye immediately because of the illustration on the cover, and I'm delighted to say that the contents are just as endearing. This story is poetically written with steady rhythm and rhyme, and illustrated beautifully (black and white on my kindle). To fully appreciate its beauty, it is best to read it on a tablet as it isn't very comfortable to read on the kindle due to the format. Personally I prefer the paper version for children's books.

The book has large pictures to keep the kids engaged during the reading. In this book the kids will learn what goodwill and teamwork can accomplish. This imaginative tale will bewitch the hearts of its readers, young and old. The book is penned in the first person, and has a natural, flowing style. The author has kept the writing style simple for young readers to follow, painting a delightful picture of gnomes. The story may be simple but was a joy to read.

My only reservation is that the hero leaves home without telling anyone, not a good message for kids in our troubled times. Parents should warn their kids about the dangers of doing that. They should also explain that what is acceptable in a story isn't so in real life. Nonetheless, I must say I greatly enjoyed this cute short story and found it a refreshing tale. The imaginative world created by the author was fun to read and would appeal to kids and adults alike.

It was a sweet and fun read from start to finish, so I rate it 4 out of 4 stars. This is the first book in the "Jacky Foster Adventure" series, and a great start for the series! It's a perfect bedtime story for young kids. I loved this story and would recommend this book to young readers who love gnomes' tales and fantasy adventures.

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Great review, gali! This sounds like such an adorable children's book because gnomes are pretty awesome! I like how you wrote a warning for parents before reading this book. I find it odd that the hero left without telling anyone... :eusa-think: I'm gad you enjoyed it otherwise!
Congratulations to the author for receiving such a positive review! :tiphat:
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hsimone wrote:Great review, gali! This sounds like such an adorable children's book because gnomes are pretty awesome! I like how you wrote a warning for parents before reading this book. I find it odd that the hero left without telling anyone... :eusa-think: I'm gad you enjoyed it otherwise!
Congratulations to the author for receiving such a positive review! :tiphat:
Thank you. It is a an adorable children's book and I greatly enjoyed it. I believe kids will enjoy it even more. :)
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Hi Gali and thank you very much for such a kind and generous review of my book, The Gnomes in the Trees. You had a very valid observation with regard to the value proposition regards Jacky running off with his dog to help the gnomes without seeking permission from his parents and what meaning that might convey to young readers. In actual fact, I had a verse where he did tell his parents that the gnome(s) needed help. My editor and I came to the conclusion that it wasn't necessary for this story. First both his parents and siblings as well as some friends were there for the birthday party and were on the porch when the "statue" gnome came over to him. Secondly, the story has this fantasy about it as to whether the whole thing really happened and therefore Jacky might not have needed to ask. My second book, The Gnomes and The Princes Birthday Parade, with the same cast of characters, does have him telling his parents that he is going off to help the gnomes again but he would be back for dinner. This story obviously has less to do with fantasy now that the storylines suggest it happened ergo him letting his parents know what he is doing. I hope that makes sense.
Thanks again so much for the wonderful review.
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Another great review! I love gnomes and, in fact, have two in my yard. :) The story sounds really cute. I agree that the plot point about someone leaving home without tellng anyone is not a good message for children.
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GnomeMaster wrote:Hi Gali and thank you very much for such a kind and generous review of my book, The Gnomes in the Trees. You had a very valid observation with regard to the value proposition regards Jacky running off with his dog to help the gnomes without seeking permission from his parents and what meaning that might convey to young readers. In actual fact, I had a verse where he did tell his parents that the gnome(s) needed help. My editor and I came to the conclusion that it wasn't necessary for this story. First both his parents and siblings as well as some friends were there for the birthday party and were on the porch when the "statue" gnome came over to him. Secondly, the story has this fantasy about it as to whether the whole thing really happened and therefore Jacky might not have needed to ask. My second book, The Gnomes and The Princes Birthday Parade, with the same cast of characters, does have him telling his parents that he is going off to help the gnomes again but he would be back for dinner. This story obviously has less to do with fantasy now that the storylines suggest it happened ergo him letting his parents know what he is doing. I hope that makes sense.
Thanks again so much for the wonderful review.
C.L. Collyer
Thank you for your comments and clarification. :)

I loved your book and your second book sounds just as good. Good luck! :)

-- July 20th, 2016, 6:41 am --
bookowlie wrote:Another great review! I love gnomes and, in fact, have two in my yard. :) The story sounds really cute. I agree that the plot point about someone leaving home without tellng anyone is not a good message for children.
Thank you. :)

I had one as well, but it broke. 8)
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Good morning Gali. If you send me a mailing address or P.O. Box, I would be happy to send a copy of the hardcover version to you. The illustrations are wonderful in hi-re, full color; in fact one reviewer said that a child could understand the story line just by looking at the illustrations.

By the way, Pride and Prejudice was one of my all time favorite books as well.
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GnomeMaster wrote:Good morning Gali. If you send me a mailing address or P.O. Box, I would be happy to send a copy of the hardcover version to you. The illustrations are wonderful in hi-re, full color; in fact one reviewer said that a child could understand the story line just by looking at the illustrations.

By the way, Pride and Prejudice was one of my all time favorite books as well.
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Good morning! :)

The illustrations looked great on the PC, and I am sure they look even better on the paper version. :)

Thank you very much for your kind offer. However, I live abroad for one nor am I sure it is allowed. :tiphat:
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gali wrote:
GnomeMaster wrote:Hi Gali and thank you very much for such a kind and generous review of my book, The Gnomes in the Trees. You had a very valid observation with regard to the value proposition regards Jacky running off with his dog to help the gnomes without seeking permission from his parents and what meaning that might convey to young readers. In actual fact, I had a verse where he did tell his parents that the gnome(s) needed help. My editor and I came to the conclusion that it wasn't necessary for this story. First both his parents and siblings as well as some friends were there for the birthday party and were on the porch when the "statue" gnome came over to him. Secondly, the story has this fantasy about it as to whether the whole thing really happened and therefore Jacky might not have needed to ask. My second book, The Gnomes and The Princes Birthday Parade, with the same cast of characters, does have him telling his parents that he is going off to help the gnomes again but he would be back for dinner. This story obviously has less to do with fantasy now that the storylines suggest it happened ergo him letting his parents know what he is doing. I hope that makes sense.
Thanks again so much for the wonderful review.
C.L. Collyer
Thank you for your comments and clarification. :)

I loved your book and your second book sounds just as good. Good luck! :)

-- July 20th, 2016, 6:41 am --
bookowlie wrote:Another great review! I love gnomes and, in fact, have two in my yard. :) The story sounds really cute. I agree that the plot point about someone leaving home without tellng anyone is not a good message for children.
Thank you. :)

I had one as well, but it broke. 8)
One of my gnomes is also slightly broken. Half of his hat broke off so he might be missing some of his brain, too. :)
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gali wrote:
GnomeMaster wrote:Hi Gali and thank you very much for such a kind and generous review of my book, The Gnomes in the Trees. You had a very valid observation with regard to the value proposition regards Jacky running off with his dog to help the gnomes without seeking permission from his parents and what meaning that might convey to young readers. In actual fact, I had a verse where he did tell his parents that the gnome(s) needed help. My editor and I came to the conclusion that it wasn't necessary for this story. First both his parents and siblings as well as some friends were there for the birthday party and were on the porch when the "statue" gnome came over to him. Secondly, the story has this fantasy about it as to whether the whole thing really happened and therefore Jacky might not have needed to ask. My second book, The Gnomes and The Princes Birthday Parade, with the same cast of characters, does have him telling his parents that he is going off to help the gnomes again but he would be back for dinner. This story obviously has less to do with fantasy now that the storylines suggest it happened ergo him letting his parents know what he is doing. I hope that makes sense.
Thanks again so much for the wonderful review.
C.L. Collyer
Thank you for your comments and clarification. :)

I loved your book and your second book sounds just as good. Good luck! :)

-- July 20th, 2016, 6:41 am --
bookowlie wrote:Another great review! I love gnomes and, in fact, have two in my yard. :) The story sounds really cute. I agree that the plot point about someone leaving home without tellng anyone is not a good message for children.
Thank you. :)

I had one as well, but it broke. 8)
One of my gnomes is also slightly broken. Half of his hat broke off so he might be missing some of his brain, too. :)
Poor gnome! :)
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His "brother" will have to make all the gnome decisions for him since he still has his hat and brain...for now. :)
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bookowlie wrote:His "brother" will have to make all the gnome decisions for him since he still has his hat and brain...for now. :)
lol you better take good care of him then, or he will make poor decisions... 8)
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Sounds like such a cute book. I agree that picture books are better read in good old-fashioned paper :) Especially for young children. Congratulations to the author for receiving such a great review!
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Rachaelamb1 wrote:Sounds like such a cute book. I agree that picture books are better read in good old-fashioned paper :) Especially for young children. Congratulations to the author for receiving such a great review!
It is! Thank you. :)
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I've been seeing quite a few children's book reviews lately, and they all just make me want to go home and pick up some of my son's favorites and start reading! :) Great review!
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