Writing Challenge (opening lines to a novel)
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Re: Writing Challenge (opening lines to a novel)
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He stabbed me in the back, but I kept running. My adrenaline was wearing off, but I kept running. My breathing was ragged and shallow, and that's when it all started closing in on me...
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Since witnessing the turning, he pledged his life to the one who had saved him from the madness of his people, but delusion still had him pinned by its coarse claws, the fight for freedom had just begun.
Hope I am not too late, I love stuff like this!
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The city was its usual bustling self. People of all walks of life went about their business as usual. None of them paid any attention to a group of large people with fur and fangs instead of skin and teeth.
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You'll walk in and think it the product of dreams and fairy tales. It will be then the meadow will strike.
It will strike hard and true, I dare say, you wont even know until its too late. But that would be a lie. The Meadow Watcher always makes her victims aware of every waking moment and of every ghastly torture
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Humm... This seems promising.mewsmash wrote:The question wasn't why Sunny had chosen to be a writer, but rather, how she had managed to write down all of the CIA's classified documents.
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