Writing Action/Fighting Scenes
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Writing Action/Fighting Scenes
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And b) don't explain what moves the characters do in specific. You should describe general movement but focus more on why certain things matter and how characters feel about it. An example could be a fight scene in which Arya Stark is involved and it's written from her perspective and the moves matter because she recalls how her "dance teacher" taught her those moves when she came to King's Landing the first time. And it makes her angry because he was killed and she really loved him. (Or, different, her enemy uses the exact same moves and she realizes that her enemy is either related to her beloved dance teacher or from the same area and suddenly, the move matters in a different way.)
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