Is this another coming-of-age fantasy about a super-powered teen, his friends and rivals?

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You are right. The book's premise is trite. I suppose there is an unending demand for such stories - it's probably why they are so popular. I like that the protagonist is black, though.
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We share the same viewpoint on this; most books that delve into this genre frequently provide me with the same perspective and ideology. However, after reading everything about this piece, I assume that the author has equipped some intriguing and distinctive concepts. Notwithstanding, in comparison to other sci-fi fantasy books, the author could not add flavor and more swirls. It almost entirely revolves around the clairvoyants and their adversaries, and the provisions of the riveting new episode are lacking. Nonetheless, this is an excellent novel worth your time because everyone will learn a lot from it, especially the plotline's denouement.
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mohamed benziane wrote: 03 Sep 2021, 16:16 I think it most definitely is, i hate books that have almost the exact same consent and story of other well know and published books, this one for instance is practically the bad version of the X-Men series, authors need to come up with something new and exciting, it's ok to have the same concept, like teens with super powers but you need to add the spice to make it stand out
I agree. X-Men was the first thing that came to my mind too. I won't go to the extent of saying that this is the bad version of X-Men, but this clearly resembles that. This is less in action and also there is no deep story. Brady Moore could have done a far better job by adding some unique stuff for this book, atleast by introducing some new powers as the mentioned ones are already seen in many sci-fi fantasies.
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This is definitely another 'coming-of-age' sci-fi! The same plot as other books of this type, just different characters. I am still enjoying reading it, but it is very similar to other books I've read! Maybe I am enjoying it because it feels familiar. The relationship between Rion and his mother is an unfamiliar touch to others I've read, but otherwise, it is the usual story!
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While there are many similarities with the common classics of this genre, there are differences as well. Of these, I particularly like Rion's trusting nature. This trait is rare in other similar stories. It gave Rion a human touch rather than a superhuman one.
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Booklover547 wrote: 03 Sep 2021, 16:35 He didn’t suddenly get powers in high school, he suddenly was forced to use them. The focus shifts to the reason why, which sets this apart from the sci fi genre.
I am not sure about this. If we take X-Men, all of them are born with those powers and that is why they try to hide from the rest of the world. And some realize them later and accidentally. I do not see any difference in that aspect related to Rion. He too born with the abilities and used them in full power only when he had to, and that is what makes him a hero, not merely having super powers, but using them for the betterment of the others.
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Ndive Mzamo wrote: 04 Sep 2021, 09:10 Yes. After separation Rion finds other Clairvoyants. They all on Psyriin, an agency with unknown agenda.This is all about mingle power with other adolescent.
The blessed ones with super powers (clairvoyants) had a rival group, as usual as all the other super powered ones we see in many other fantasies. But in addition to them we see the struggle for power and domination within the subgroups of clairvoyants. And it is shown how some became predators that hunt their own people, and those who became prey had to merely hide from the unknown rival group as well as their own kind.
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Devalsodha wrote: 04 Sep 2021, 12:34 I agree that the concept of the story is common like fantasy, teen with super power etc. But yes the author added a spice by mixing up mother son relationship along with the Science fiction.
Rion's character and his style to tackle his setbacks is interesting too.
But do we see much of a mother-son relationship? I did not see there relationship even as a one in between close friends. Rion's mother was too busy and too tired when she was back at home. Their conversations were limited to few words, and the emotional support is really scarce. We can put that in a way that when you are blessed with one thing, you have to sacrifice some other things. Both of them did not want to share thier secrets because they actually were not aware about other's personal life.
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I think Rion's story has a couple of factors that set it apart from the run-of-the-mill coming of age and getting superpowers trope. First, Rion didn't get his superpowers in high school. He already had them; his mother had just insisted that he suppress and not use them. Secondly is that very relationship. It's not unusual for there to be tension between the teen and the parent(s) in these books, but it is unusual for the 'evil ones' to be the CAUSE of that tension. The author has taken a well-used trope and given it a few twists to create something unique.
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I have to admit - this storyline is very, very similar to others. However, I must say that this book takes a fresh twist on the very overused "teenager gets superpowers" trope.
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I agree with you @Sushan. This reminds me of two things. One is a headline statement which I came across today on social media which read, "Supernatural things to fall on earth soon" :). Two is my times in high school - it was so common to hear stories of people battling with super powers. I guess this is the same sci/fi stories. I wish there would be a newer concept to thing of.
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Reader-247 wrote: 04 Sep 2021, 14:50 I think this book has used the recipe for trending commonalities fron teen and/or young adult hits, it gives X-men-esque vibes. Super powers, good versus evil, teen drama, all over uttilized, all quite redundant.
Though I agree with you for a certain extent, I won't go to the length of saying this a redundant book. Yes, the author has used a common recipe, but the rest of the story is unique (or atleast not a copy or an adaptation). Rion was a totally new character with different character qualities, and most importantly he is a black kid, which we do not see much in young adult sci-fi fantasy. So I think there are credits that the author earned with his book though he used a common core as the base for it.
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Black Jewel wrote: 04 Sep 2021, 20:14 I lean heavily towards this being just another sci-fi/fantasy coming of age story that has been so heavily done in the past. This concept has been heavily done, and I don't really feel that Rion's story added anything truly new to this category.
I agree. For the particular sci-fi category per se it actually added nothing new. I think that is not because this book was bad, but the category was heavily done in the past and there is nothing left to be added. But we have to appreciate the author discussing some other topics like mother-son relationship in a commercialized society, importance of connections, racism and gender discrimination, etc.
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I think the story has been built on a common old concept of most YA novels. However, despite the fact that the story of Rion and his Clairvoyant friends mimics what happens in X-Men, Avengers, and many others, I think Moore did a great job in making the story enjoyable. It may be not totally unique in its concept but creativity is never lacking in any work, it's only its levels that vary.
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I agree. We're used to it already. Teen with a complicated life trying to figure things out. Suddenly he realizes he's special with special abilities and there's more people like him. He becomes the hero and there's someone out to get him. Same story every time.
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