Review by Sushan -- There and Back There Again

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Review by Sushan -- There and Back There Again

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[Following is a volunteer review of "There and Back There Again" by Andrew Alsup.]
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It has been quite a long time since I reviewed a non-fiction book. So for a change, I decided to review a non-fiction book, and I chose the only available one, There and Back There Again by Andrew Alsup. I began the reading very enthusiastically, but unfortunately it lasted through only a few pages. I would like to begin my review by giving my rating for this book, 1 out of 4 stars, and then I will justify my rating and share my reading experience with you.

It was quite a small book which had only 156 pages. It was divided into several sections as well as several chapters. But the way that the book was organized made it difficult to understand the actual demarcations in between those sections and chapters.

The book was not written under a single topic or a theme. It was an assortment of various topics that belonged to various themes. Amongst those, the mainly highlighted theme was ‘privacy’. The author has described his experiences regarding his auditory hallucinations, and he has described how difficult it is to bear up when one’s privacy is violated. But apparently his ultimate goal was to attract some more people to support his attempt to add the 28th amendment to the US constitution, which is regarding the citizens being able to resist any violation to their privacy by government institutions. This amendment is an internet rumor and the author is trying to give it some publicity. In addition to that there were some other writings under the themes like, religion, law, sex, mathematics, etc.

Though it was very hard to notice any, I would like to start with some good things about the book for the sake of constructive criticism. The author has used the language in a gross manner to express his ideas. Though some may feel uncomfortable with that, I think it has done its part in delivering the exact message in the exact intensity as the author wanted it. Some nice photographs and drawings were included as well. Somehow, the proofreading and editing was done exceptionally well. Though it was a book with a large number of complex sentences and difficult words, I found only a handful of mistakes.

When considering the bad things about the book, the most annoying feature was repeating the same thing again and again. The author has repeatedly explained the importance of ‘privacy’, and it made the reading experience really boring. I was counting the pages wishing it to end soon. In addition to that, there was no proper organization of the book. The facts were mentioned here and there. Not only that, but the sentences were too long and combined with commas, making them really complex. Altogether, this made the reading very difficult.

I do not recommend this to anybody. Maybe someone who is really interested in adding an amendment to the US constitution may find it interesting.

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Interesting review! It sounds like the author was traumatized and wants to get his story out there. You did a great job reviewing this book. Thanks.
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How tragic. I hadn't caught the political vibe from the summary, and I've thought about reading this one. I'm glad I read your review before deciding to read it.
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Sounds like a tough one. On a light not, maybe the title refers to the repitition of the same thing over and over! Thanks for the candid review.
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kdstrack wrote: 22 Jan 2019, 10:49 Interesting review! It sounds like the author was traumatized and wants to get his story out there. You did a great job reviewing this book. Thanks.
Yeah, I think that he is really a psychiatric patient. Thanks for the kind comment 👍👍
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Vscholz wrote: 22 Jan 2019, 14:42 How tragic. I hadn't caught the political vibe from the summary, and I've thought about reading this one. I'm glad I read your review before deciding to read it.
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Cotwani wrote: 24 Jan 2019, 02:58 Sounds like a tough one. On a light not, maybe the title refers to the repitition of the same thing over and over! Thanks for the candid review.
Thanks for the insight regarding the topic. And thanks again for commenting 👍👍
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I'm not into political vibes even though I have had my fair share in them, but the errors and mistakes that you took care to mention were clearly off putting. Thanks for the heads up!
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Sahani Nimandra wrote: 25 Jan 2019, 04:03 I'm not into political vibes even though I have had my fair share in them, but the errors and mistakes that you took care to mention were clearly off putting. Thanks for the heads up!
Before reading, I also was not aware that the book had something to do with politics. Thanks for stopping by 👍👍
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I also rated this book at a 1 out of 4-stars. I was thrown off within the beginning part of the book as well.
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chelhack wrote: 25 Jan 2019, 23:54 I also rated this book at a 1 out of 4-stars. I was thrown off within the beginning part of the book as well.
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You are right, it's very hard to read the book with repeating thoughts, especially if the theme is boring. Thanks for your warning through this review!
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Sarah Tariq wrote: 26 Jan 2019, 11:48 You are right, it's very hard to read the book with repeating thoughts, especially if the theme is boring. Thanks for your warning through this review!
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I also was thinking about reading this one and appreciate your honesty, you did good job showing both the positives and negatives. This one is unfortunately not for me
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Swat3737 wrote: 27 Jan 2019, 12:06 I also was thinking about reading this one and appreciate your honesty, you did good job showing both the positives and negatives. This one is unfortunately not for me
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