Official Review: The Candle Room by Daniel K. Gentile
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Re: Official Review: The Candle Room by Daniel K. Gentile
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Your review style fits with the courtroom scenes of the book. I am a bit disappointed that the author would expose the guilty one in the first chapter! In all, it may be a good book just to read for entertainment.As previously mentioned, though, the plot and resulting climax were not suspenseful. Reading through my notes, I found written on page eight: “XX did it as revenge for XX.” Now, you realize I’ve omitted the spoilers, but suffice it to say—I understood whodunit in chapter one. Not only was the murderer expected, but I felt that they lacked character development. I would have appreciated more little clues throughout that culminated in an ah-ha moment in the end. The killer is revealed in more of a data dump than a stunning revelation.
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Thank you for this very entertaining review!
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I wonder if the author took that sentence out because, on July 30th, I do not see that anywhere! So, I don't know who murdered Ollie. The author may have read your review and edited that part out.LV2R wrote: ↑23 Jul 2018, 19:57Your review style fits with the courtroom scenes of the book. I am a bit disappointed that the author would expose the guilty one in the first chapter! In all, it may be a good book just to read for entertainment.As previously mentioned, though, the plot and resulting climax were not suspenseful. Reading through my notes, I found written on page eight: “XX did it as revenge for XX.” Now, you realize I’ve omitted the spoilers, but suffice it to say—I understood whodunit in chapter one. Not only was the murderer expected, but I felt that they lacked character development. I would have appreciated more little clues throughout that culminated in an ah-ha moment in the end. The killer is revealed in more of a data dump than a stunning revelation.
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Unfortunately, I´ve read too many thrillers and courtroom stories so I´d probably be able to predict the storyline too.
Maybe I´ll give it a chance because of the interesting characters and dialogues.
Thanks!
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