Official Review: The girl At The River

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Official Review: The girl At The River

Post by CataclysmicKnight » 07 Apr 2018, 23:06

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The girl At The River" by tangerlene francis.]
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2 out of 4 stars
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The world is a scary place, and even the most kind, goodhearted, wonderful people can have the most terrible things happen to them. Thus is the case in The Girl at the River: Blindsided by Darkness and Deception by Tangerlene Francis. This short book (70 pages according to Amazon) is essentially a parable over six chapters told via the fictional life of Shelby Clark, an ordinary girl who faces terrible things in her life.

The book begins with Shelby and her family facing issues with money. She is one of six children and her father didn't earn enough money for everything they needed, so Matthew, the eldest sibling, turned to selling drugs. He contributed to the family without telling them how he was earning the money, and it isn't long until he ends up murdered. This causes Shelby, the only one who did know about his illicit drug dealing, to feel guilty and attempt to commit suicide.

The story then jumps 8 years ahead, where Shelby is now in college. Unfortunately, she ends up making some frenemies that she calls the SB girls. The initials aren't ever truly defined, but two chapters later Tangerlene uses the phrase "identify your SBs (stumbling blocks)", so I'm assuming this was an undefined hint at what was to come. Sadly, these girls cause some absolutely terrible things to happen to Shelby, including drugging her and having her raped. Luckily this rape is very quickly glossed over and takes only a single paragraph to explain it all.

Unfortunately, this fast forward pace is maintained throughout the entire book. Amazon says the book is 70 pages long, but the entire thing fits in less than 130 screens in my iBooks app on my phone and there were numerous blank pages or pages that sum up chapters. There are six chapters total and there are several time jumps. Each chapter ends with a reflection that sums up the important lesson of the chapter and presents the reader with a few questions to make it more personal. For example, in the chapter that ends with Shelby's brother Matthew murdered and her suicide attempt, she asks you what your "river" is and whether you're currently at peace.

Using the river as a metaphor is something that occurs throughout the book. For Shelby this is a literal river, but it's also presumably used as a metaphor for everyone else. From what I'm aware of, asking someone what their river is would be akin to asking what your park bench is (for those who like to relax on a park bench), or what your happy space is. In another chapter, where Shelby loses herself to try to fit in with and befriend the SB girls, Tangerlene refers to the turning away from herself and God as "the desert", which is a "dry place" compared to Shelby's river. The two combined make for a rather elegant, simple metaphor.

The other major focus of the book is Christianity. The Clark family is very religious, and throughout all of the chapters Shelby's problems are comparative to her relationship with God. When things are going wrong, it's because Shelby stopped going to the river and reflecting there, letting her relationship with God slip away. On the other hand, when Shelby was trying to get through rough times and get better, she was coming back to God. There were also a few Bible verses mentioned in the book, and as a Christian myself I feel that Tangerlene did a wonderful job weaving Christianity into the book.

Tangerlene ends up covering a few major lessons here in The Girl at the River, but the delivery method ranges from confusing to absurd without any of the characters having any personality. The book also moves so fast that I never felt drawn into the story being told at all. I'm sure there are people who will relate to some of the stories here, but the majority of folks (myself included) can't really relate much to having a drug dealer brother who is murdered or being raped by multiple men while passed out from a drug given to us by women who claim to be friends, and then waking up next to one and being beaten by one so badly that we end up in a coma shortly after, let alone the rest of the twists. However, I can see why Tangerlene went with such wild events for Shelby to face - not only do they show just how terrible things can be when we stray too far from the path, Shelby making it through such horrific events also gives us hope that surely we can get through whatever obstacles we face too.

This was a really quick, light read despite the heavy themes due to everything moving at a whirlwind pace. I only found a couple errors and neither messed with my experience whatsoever. I could see teenagers perhaps getting the most out of it, but it would have to be teenagers who are Christian and aren't triggered by reading a book that involves rape. The caveat would be that this is basically a set of parables within one woman's fictional life, it doesn't really work as just a piece of fiction. I'd rate the book 1.5 stars if I could, but since I can't my rating of The Girl at the River is 2 out of 4 stars.

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Post by nafula mukhono » 09 Apr 2018, 12:50

nice review! i love it

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Post by stacie k » 09 Apr 2018, 13:25

CataclysmicKnight wrote:
07 Apr 2018, 23:06
The book also moves so fast that I never felt drawn into the story being told at all. I'm sure there are people who will relate to some of the stories here, but the majority of folks (myself included) can't really relate much to having a drug dealer brother who is murdered or being raped by multiple men while passed out from a drug given to us by women who claim to be friends, and then waking up next to one and being beaten by one so badly that we end up in a coma shortly after, let alone the rest of the twists. However, I can see why Tangerlene went with such wild events for Shelby to face - not only do they show just how terrible things can be when we stray too far from the path, Shelby making it through such horrific events also gives us hope that surely we can get through whatever obstacles we face too.
I'm glad you found some positive explanation for choosing these extreme circumstances to put the character through. I agree that most readers won't be able to relate. I'm glad for the hope and perspective that a reading of this book would offer. I do like the river analogy and the truths the author attempted to convey. Thanks for a well-done review. You really helped me know what to expect from this book.
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Post by RoselineIjeoma » 09 Apr 2018, 15:51

Nice review

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Post by Mr Benji » 09 Apr 2018, 17:38

I wonder :
What were the pressures that really pushed Matthew into selling drugs,besides finances.?
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Post by beck0823 » 11 Apr 2018, 10:43

That is an interesting concept, using the river as a metaphor, however knowing that it is that short does make me wary. That seems like a lot of heavy subject matter to deal with in such a short time!

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Post by Libs_Books » 12 Apr 2018, 09:28

The river and the desert as spiritual metaphors sound very worthwhile, but the story as a whole, being so grim and so rushed doesn't sound like a good idea. As you say, there probably aren't many people who can relate that closely to the subject matter, so surely we need the author to take time to help us get inside that world. I thought your conclusions sounded very fair.

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Post by Eileen R » 13 Apr 2018, 10:13

Shelby has really faced a hard life. I don't think I can survive such an emotional read because I know I'll be crying the whole time. Thanks for such a comprehensive review

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Post by crediblereading2 » 13 Apr 2018, 16:31

This sounds like a tsunami. Everything happening so fast. Maybe this is the author's way of making the readers excited. Shelby has miraculously survived these hardships by the grace of God.

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