Official Review: Dangerous Journey by Clark Selby
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Re: Official Review: Dangerous Journey by Clark Selby
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There are some books you read that you think, "Man, this book is so horrible. There is no salvaging it." This wasn't one of those. It had a lot of errors, but it's all fixable. I think it could be a good story with some work. Thanks for commenting!bookowlie wrote: ↑14 Dec 2017, 21:31 Oh, dear...it sounds like this book has a bunch of issues. Grammatical errors are a distracting annoyance and too many would make me feel like I am reading a draft rather than a published work. The repetition is also a big problem. You gave lots of constructive criticism and I hope the author is able to use your comments to improve future works.
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