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Official Review: On Days Like This by Mary Faderan

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "On Days Like This" by Mary Faderan.]
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1 out of 4 stars
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On Days Like This by Mary Faderan is a fiction book that may be classified as a thriller.

Mary Scott has just graduated with a Ph.D. in Biology from the University of Merton. She has secured a job working as a researcher at Yale’s School of Medicine and will be packing up and moving to her new home the following day. Mary is excited to put her degree to use and hopes to be successful in her career but instead finds herself in a precarious situation. Her fellow researchers seem welcoming at first, but in reality, they are not who they seem. In reality, she is surrounded by people who wish to see her dead. These nefarious individuals are determined to do anything they can to prevent Mary from reaching her full potential.

This author has a very creative writing style and takes the plot in this story down several pathways. The storyline involves rogue FBI agents, an undercover MI5 agent, a coven, espionage, the Yakuza, and other shocking plot twists. While I appreciated the author’s creativity, I struggled with how all of these twists were connected, and some seemed too far fetched for me.

What I liked most about this story was the determination that Mary had. It was clear she was not comfortable in her new position and was not thriving at Yale, yet she persevered. She had the opportunity to terminate her employment and move to another city but decided against doing so because she wanted her research to be successful. This is a character trait that I admired in Mary.

What I disliked most about this book was the complicated storyline. I lost interest once the plot strayed down multiple paths. I found the storyline confusing. Many of these paths were not resolved, which led to more confusion. I would have loved to see a streamlined plot that focused on one of these paths with a resolution in the end. I loved the premise that Mary could be in danger due to her relation to her father and his connection to the Yakuza. I bought into this storyline and found it enjoyable and would have liked to see this play out throughout the book.

Unfortunately, this book has not been professionally edited and has an overabundance of errors. Throughout the book, there are errors in sentence structure that made it difficult to follow the storyline. In addition, there are a number of grammatical, punctuation, and spelling errors. Some of the characters' names are spelled differently in different areas of the book, sometimes on the same page. These errors were a distraction while reading and made it difficult for me to stay engaged while reading. This book could have potential if edited thoroughly.

It is important to note that this book contains profanity and adult content, therefore it should be reserved for mature or adult audiences. There are also graphic descriptions of death and dying that some may find disturbing. I would not recommend this book to individuals who are sensitive to homosexuality or bisexuality as there are references to these relationships in this book.

In my honest opinion, there are so many errors throughout this book that it was cumbersome to get through. I found the overall storyline difficult to follow given the numerous plot twists that take this story in so many different directions at once. I enjoyed the beginning of the book, and I wanted to love the book in its entirety, but it fell short for me. Considering all the critical aspects mentioned, including the need for editing, I rate this book 1 out of 4 stars.

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This seems a novel with a potential but overburdened by development problems and many errors. A professional editor might help the author in rewriting and proofreading the book to save it. Thank you for your honest review!
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This phrase "overabundance of errors" cut me off in the book review. I would have enjoyed reading this book because of the elements of intrigue, mystery and crime. I hope the author employs the services of a professional editor.

Good review!
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Errors are put off not to talk of 'overabundance of errors'.
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The twists in plot can make it difficult for someone like me to read.
Still a good review.
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Post by buttercake20+ »

I am always up for a good plot twist but not when it becomes excessive and derails from the actual theme of the book. But i like that the protagonist seems to be a determined and relentless person. The review is also very datailed and straight to the point. I don't think this would be a good book for me.
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It sounds as if this book is good in theory, but not in execution. I may check it out because the story does sound interesting, but I won't be surprised if I can't get through it. Thanks for the review.
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Wonderful review. It’s informative and i’m looking forward to give it a read it.
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