Official Review: Wings At Dawn by Marie Balustrade

Please use this sub-forum to discuss any crime, thriller, mystery or horror books or series.
Forum rules
Authors and publishers are not able to post replies in the review topics.
Post Reply
User avatar
Kaylee123
Posts: 298
Joined: 01 Feb 2019, 13:55
Currently Reading: The Divergent Library
Bookshelf Size: 73
Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-kaylee123.html
Latest Review: Gods of Sound by QM Schaffer

Official Review: Wings At Dawn by Marie Balustrade

Post by Kaylee123 »

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Wings At Dawn" by Marie Balustrade.]
Book Cover
3 out of 4 stars
Share This Review


Wings at Dawn, by Marie Balustrade, is one of the most intense books I have read in a long time. It centers around Alex, Julian, and Matt, longtime friends. Alex was sent to Delhi on a magazine assignment to expose child trafficking and prostitution in India. He recruits Julian, a photographer, and Matt, a human rights lawyer to help. As they work undercover in different brothels to try to help children escape with the help of some locals, they learn horrifying things.

What I enjoyed most about this book was the friendship between Alex, Julian, and Matt. They were more like brothers than friends. At one point, Julian thought to himself, “Matt and Alex are the pillars of my soul, if anything happens to either of them it would be the end of my world.” They went through traumatic events and were always there for each other. For example, when Julian had a meltdown, Matt and Alex went so far as to hold him and purr in his ear like a cat. They had figured out it was the only thing that calmed him down when things got really bad. I also enjoyed the banter between the men. It helped lighten the mood.

What I liked least about the book were all the errors I found. Unfortunately, I don’t think it was professionally edited. There were spelling errors, punctuation errors, hyphens in random places, and so many formatting issues. Page numbers appeared in random places. The letter “y” randomly appeared in between paragraphs. It was a distraction, which is a shame since the story was so intriguing. Also, there were a lot of footnotes, which normally wouldn’t be an issue, but the explanations were at the end of the book. This wasn’t efficient for the e-book. Having to constantly scroll to the end of the story and back messed up the flow.

As I stated earlier, this book was intense. Children should not read this. Teenagers should not read this. Even a lot of adults would probably have a hard time reading it. There are graphic rape scenes, foul language, and death. It goes into great detail regarding what happens to child prostitutes, both boys and girls. Some of the children in the book were as young as five years old. Although it is a work of fiction, these events are based on real life. It’s a lot to handle. I cried more than once. Despite all that, I did enjoy the book. It was eye-opening. So, adults who aren’t too sensitive could still enjoy it.

I would rate Wings at Dawn 3 out of 4 stars. I can’t give it a 4 because of all the errors. If it gets professionally edited, it has the potential to be a 4. I wouldn't give it a 2, though, because even though it was tough to read, it was extremely interesting. I wanted to keep reading to see what happened next. I was never bored reading it.

Wings at Dawn covers a serious, horrific topic. However, I would still recommend it to others as a reminder that through the horror, there is hope and goodness in the world. I think the character of Alex said it best when he told a rescued boy, “Be like the eagle who waits to spread its wings at dawn and fly again.”

******
Wings At Dawn
View: on Bookshelves | on Amazon
User avatar
Amy747
Posts: 258
Joined: 07 Feb 2020, 11:12
Currently Reading:
Bookshelf Size: 70
Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-amy747.html
Latest Review: Real Secrets Of Life by Krishna Jagarnath

Post by Amy747 »

This book sounds too full on for me but exciting for some. The purring in the ear sounds a bit weird but I guess it really shows the mens close friendship. Nice review.
User avatar
Ever_Reading
Posts: 825
Joined: 22 Apr 2018, 10:01
Favorite Book: A Thousand Splendid Suns
Currently Reading:
Bookshelf Size: 139
Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-ever-reading.html
Latest Review: Stand Up! For Yourself by Jennie Msangi
Reading Device: B00JG8GOWU

Post by Ever_Reading »

It is unfortunate that poor formatting and editing yet again ruin a potentially good read. I hope the author fixes the errors with your review in mind. Great work. Thank you!
Here’s to books, the cheapest vacation you can buy.
— Charlaine Harris :techie-studyingbrown:
User avatar
xoxoAnushka
Posts: 234
Joined: 03 Jan 2020, 03:37
Favorite Book: "Better dead than divorced"
Currently Reading:
Bookshelf Size: 34
Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-xoxoanushka.html
Latest Review: That Guy What Kill Topsy by Peter Wood Cotterill

Post by xoxoAnushka »

It is too dissapointing that there were lot of errors. However, This books provides a lot of brutal encounters. Nice review!
User avatar
NetMassimo
Previous Member of the Month
Posts: 3921
Joined: 24 Jul 2019, 06:37
2021 Reading Goal: 60
Currently Reading: Elysium Fire
Bookshelf Size: 244
Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-netmassimo.html
Latest Review: The Central Swirlio by Quiche de Flurry

Post by NetMassimo »

I read books with sensitive subjects, but this one must be really tough to read. Shame for the errors, even more because some are probably due to a messy convertion into the ebook you read. Thank you for your honest review!
Ciao :)
Massimo
User avatar
Wamakima
Posts: 350
Joined: 04 Nov 2017, 01:36
2021 Reading Goal: 12
Currently Reading:
Bookshelf Size: 69
Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-wamakima.html
Latest Review: Creating Literary Stories: A Fiction Writer's Guide by William H. Coles

Post by Wamakima »

I like to challenge myself, and understand the horrible evils of the world. I believe that if the book gets another round of editing, it will be an awesome read. I really enjoyed reading your review.
But the path I’ve chosen has always been the right one, and I wouldn’t have had it any other way. :)
Marty_Kelly
Posts: 222
Joined: 13 Oct 2019, 04:16
Currently Reading:
Bookshelf Size: 45
Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-marty-kelly.html
Latest Review: Genetic Spurn - The Reality? by M. R. Coates - Rutgers Univ. GSM

Post by Marty_Kelly »

Great review. I particularly like the title of the book and your review has got me hooked. It's a shame about the errors but still, this is one more book added to my "To read" list. Thanks for your nice review.
Post Reply

Return to “Crime, Thrillers, Mystery and Horror Books”