Official Review: Long About Ten Years

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Long About Ten Years" by Paul O. Snawder, Vera Hensley, Carol Wooten.]
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3 out of 4 stars
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Sylvester Adam Decker's wife, Sarah Foster, seemingly died of a snakebite ten years ago in 1906. Being an abusive husband, Sylvester was more enraged than upset at her death. He has spent the past decade seething in resentment towards her for leaving him. But now, a mysterious stranger approaches him with a sinister proposition. All of a sudden, he finds himself reliving the days after he proposed to her. But all is not as it seems.

By now, you may have assumed that Sylvester is the protagonist of Long About Ten Years; I did too. But this couldn't be further from the truth. Authors Paul O. Snawder, Vera Hensley, and Carol Wooten have painstakingly developed a vast, multi-generational plot with several characters and many twists and turns along the way. So much happens over the course of this book, you'll feel ten years have passed by the time you finish it.

Along with the plot, the characters are definitely one of the best parts of this book. One of the more distinctive ones is the parson that delights in making snakes dance, and he might not be as pious as he seems. Most of the characters in this book aren't morally perfect; a few of them may even hurt their own family to get what they want. And that's why the book feels so real. The characters have motivations and insecurities, and even the ones that appear towards the end of the book get their own backstories.

The writing style is very distinctive, fitting the book's historical setting. At times, the narrator sounds like a neighbor telling you about the recent gossip in town, which I really liked. Take this excerpt, describing the church of the aforementioned parson:

"I hear-tell that sometimes they'd even take to drinking strychnine just to see if the man upstairs would keep them from dying from the poison. Hell, even if He did, that stuff still has to taste like hot rotten eggs, and burn like blue flame moonshine going down. Folks used to say that old Applegate would drink that poison and then spit it in the eyes of those rattlers so they couldn't see where to bite him."

Unfortunately, this book is not without its faults. For one thing, it could really use a round of editing. I am usually lenient when it comes to commas, but there were numerous instances here where a necessary comma was omitted. I also found some more typos, some of which were rather confusing to read.

All in all, I'd rate this book 3 out of 4 stars. It's got an amazing plot and a unique cast of characters, but the editing issues hold it back. It's very commendable that a book with three authors manages to keep the writing consistent.

I'd recommend this to everyone interested in historical settings as well as family dramas. Although the book does involve some heavy religious themes, I didn't feel it was overly preachy. The book does have some profanity and depictions of violence, including rape, so I wouldn't recommend it to those under 18.

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I truly believe that literature that explores any form of abuse should be appreciated. There is so much unwarranted abuse out there it is actually very frightening. Thanks for an amazing review and I will definitely be reading up on this interesting story.
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It is thrilling and scary both at the same time. I should really learn some of your reviewing techniques. Wonderful review!
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What an interesting premise, even more so considering Sylvester isn't even the protagonist. I enjoy complex plots with several characters, so this could be right up my alley. Thanks for the review!
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I really like early twentieth-century historical fiction and what you said about the writing and characters nearly had me sold! But unfortunately, I don't like books with too many main characters. I can imagine a lot of other readers really liking the idea though. Do hope the author gets the book professionally edited, sounds like this book has a lot of potential in bookstores.
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I was becoming invested in learning Sylvester's story, but your threw a twist into your review! This sounds like an interesting author to get to know. Thanks for the intriguing review.
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Oh dear, it's always a pity when a book with a good plot and cast of characters is heavily overshadowed by editing issues. Hopefully, the author takes your advice. Thanks for the insightful review!
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Good characters can make up for so many other flaws. Therefore, I'm glad that this one does well in that aspect. I just don't think it's for me, though. Thanks for the review.
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I am curious about this collaboration by three authors. And more curious about the unusual characters. I hope the editing issues can be remedied soon.
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What an enticing review! I hope this book gets another editing run so that I can explore all those plots and all those characters. :D
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I love stories with good character development as well as good plots! I will have to take a look at this one. Thanks for a wonderful review!
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Falconcrest wrote: 08 Nov 2019, 02:35 I truly believe that literature that explores any form of abuse should be appreciated. There is so much unwarranted abuse out there it is actually very frightening. Thanks for an amazing review and I will definitely be reading up on this interesting story.
Ekta Swarnkar wrote: 08 Nov 2019, 11:23 It is thrilling and scary both at the same time. I should really learn some of your reviewing techniques. Wonderful review!
Tomah wrote: 08 Nov 2019, 11:33 What an interesting premise, even more so considering Sylvester isn't even the protagonist. I enjoy complex plots with several characters, so this could be right up my alley. Thanks for the review!
Thank you all for the kind words :D
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Morally imperfect characters, dancing snakes, and a complex plot... sounds enthralling to me! Hopefully another round of editing will make it the finalized tale it deserves to be.
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I like the type of characters your described. Flaws give the cast of characters more depth than if they are all perfect in all of their ways. And the narrator’s voice is a unique part of the story as well. Thanks for the great review!
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La Cabra wrote: 08 Nov 2019, 13:02 I really like early twentieth-century historical fiction and what you said about the writing and characters nearly had me sold! But unfortunately, I don't like books with too many main characters. I can imagine a lot of other readers really liking the idea though. Do hope the author gets the book professionally edited, sounds like this book has a lot of potential in bookstores.
kdstrack wrote: 08 Nov 2019, 14:54 I was becoming invested in learning Sylvester's story, but your threw a twist into your review! This sounds like an interesting author to get to know. Thanks for the intriguing review.
gen_g wrote: 08 Nov 2019, 18:18 Oh dear, it's always a pity when a book with a good plot and cast of characters is heavily overshadowed by editing issues. Hopefully, the author takes your advice. Thanks for the insightful review!
Thank you all for the kind words! :D
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