Official Review: Trent Foster & The Council of 10

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Official Review: Trent Foster & The Council of 10

Post by desantismt_17 » 14 Jan 2019, 11:57

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Trent Foster & The Council of 10" by Matt Whiteside.]
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2 out of 4 stars
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What would you do if you suddenly discovered you are wanted by ancient intergalactic beings and that you have nearly unlimited powers? This is exactly the question Trent must answer in Trent Foster and the Council of 10 by Matt Whiteside. Lately, Trent has been depressed. His life feels empty, and his job as a personal trainer just isn’t fulfilling anymore. Everything changes, though, when Trent’s apartment is blown up and Trent is kidnapped.

Rainjier is a Sentinel, a being with magnificent abilities tasked with keeping the galaxy safe. When the Council (ten beings who give the Sentinels their assignments) start gunning for Trent, Rainjier knows something’s wrong. Trent has no history of violence and can’t possibly be a threat to the galaxy. He rushes to Earth and gets Trent before the real bad guys can. Along with Trent’s dog and co-worker, Trent and Rainjier must figure out why the Council wants Trent, as well as what Trent’s powers are, before the other Sentinels catch them.

This book contains a fantastic adventure. From the first explosion, the action takes off running. Once Trent comes into his powers, things get even more interesting, as his abilities seem almost limitless. This could have had the effect of making Trent overcome everything too easily, but the author did a great job of keeping the threat real.

Speaking of the threat, the Sentinels were my favorite part of this book. There were several from different planets. Their various appearances added a nice touch. For example, a giant Sentinel captures Trent’s friend Ferra. At one point aboard the Sentinel’s ship, Ferra has to use the facilities, which are appropriately sized for her captor. The result was quite humorous. The array of powers was fascinating, too. One Sentinel could create stunningly realistic visual and auditory illusions. Another has abilities similar to the sirens of Greek myth, and it turns out she’s descended from them.

While the story had a lot of potential, the writing left me wanting. The attitudes of many of the characters were cynical, which is putting it mildly. Almost any time someone was genuine or heartfelt, at least two other characters would make fun of that person for thinking something nice. I wonder if this was supposed to be humorous, and if it had been a few isolated incidents, it may have been. But it happened so much that I got to the point where I just wanted anyone to be supportive of anything.

The book also was not very well-edited. There were punctuation marks missing or misused throughout. There were also many typos, such as “off” rather than “of” when Trent is filling his dog’s food bowl early on in the book. The book is mainly in past tense, but there were several places where a paragraph or two would suddenly shift to present. This jarred me from the story every time it happened, and it took me a bit to get back in.

Due to the errors and a general discontent with the writing’s overall tone, I rate Trent Foster and the Council of 10 2 out of 4 stars. The story concept brings my rating up from 1. Toward the end, I briefly thought about giving this 3, but without spoiling, the ending did something strange that confused me and lowered my rating back to 2. There are quite a few instances of adult language and thoughts in this book, which means I recommend it only for readers aged eighteen and up. Fans of superhero fiction or science fiction adventure stories might enjoy this book. If it bothers you, beware the cynicism. Otherwise, hop aboard a ship and join Trent on a journey into the unknown.

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Post by kandscreeley » 15 Jan 2019, 09:25

It's too bad about the editing in this one because the plot does sound intriguing. I have to wonder what makes Trent so special and what's going to happen to him. The cynical nature of the characters is a bit odd, though. I think I'll skip this one. Thanks.
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Post by Nyambura Githui » 15 Jan 2019, 10:19

Good review. Am all for books about galactic beings, but I'll have to skip this one. Am curious though about Trent's unlimited powers.

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Post by Jessacardinal » 15 Jan 2019, 14:04

This doesn't sound like my cup of tea, however, I bet the action is great for a reader interested in the genre!
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Post by ButterscotchCherrie » 15 Jan 2019, 16:09

I quite like cynicism, but I guess it gets monotonous if that's all there is, and it probably needs to strike the right humorous note too. Shame the writing didn't make the most of the great premise about the Sentinels.

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Post by Anthony__ » 15 Jan 2019, 20:47

I not actually a fan of this kind of book. All the same thank you for the review

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Post by kdstrack » 17 Jan 2019, 23:00

I was excited about the unlimited superpowers! The errors and cynicism brought me back to reality. Thanks for an excellent review.

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Post by Itskai88 » 21 Jan 2019, 13:34

Trent's adventures with his powers that are limitless would have been fun to read, it is a pity that it is not well edited. Thanks for the lovely review.

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Post by Faithmwangi » 24 Jan 2019, 08:55

"What would you do if you suddenly discovered you are wanted by ancient intergalactic beings and that you have nearly unlimited powers?"
I would totally freak out. First, for fear for my life and second, I have powers!!!!
I appreciate the book's storyline however editing issues are normally a turn off for me. I hope the author heeds to the comments of the reviewer and professionally edits the read; maybe then I'll reconsider.
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