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Post by Kelebogile Mbangi » 01 Sep 2018, 08:20

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Homo atromitos saw the rise of the New Sun" by Z. Mondle.]
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1 out of 4 stars
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The Homo atromitos saw the rise of the New Sun is a science fiction book by Z. Mondle.

Hannah is an astrophysicist who lives in the age of the Homo atromitos, a genetically modified race of humans. Their enhanced gene makeup allows them to achieve a perfectly balanced world - ecologically and socially. Hannah, her husband, and daughter live on a mountain, close to nature. She is expecting her second child. Despite discovering that her unborn child has a gene mutation, all is well. The situation can easily be corrected through a procedure by a geneticist. One night, however, their lives are disrupted by a massive earthquake. Stranger yet, the sun does not rise the next day. Isolated and away from the rest of the world, Hannah and her family must find a way to survive under the life-threatening situation and find answers.

The first chapter of this book took my breath away! The peace that Hannah feels, her gratitude for life, and her curiosity permeate the pages, creating an uplifting mood. Exploring their advanced world filled me with wonder. Initially, I noticed quite a few grammatical errors, but at this point I was entranced and could not care less. Then it all went downhill.

From the second chapter on, the grammar was horrible. There were ideas that I simply could not comprehend because of the bad grammar. This was especially the case in the dialogue between Hannah and her daughter, Abbie. The two have lengthy discussions about the physical principles that govern our magnificent universe. Although interested, I felt left out of these conversations as the information went right above my head. These conversations could have been an exciting highlight for those who love physics and the wonders to be found in our universe. Sadly, the bad grammar spoilt it all.

I understand that this is a work of fiction, however, some of the scenes described are too fictitious for my liking. For example, the family makes food on a grill during an earthquake. How is that physically possible? This is just one of the scenes which just did not appear to be remotely plausible.

The ending was abrupt. It is as though the author got tired of writing and decided to wrap things up. It left me with so many unanswered questions. The answers to those questions were what kept me reading on in the first place. I am one unsatisfied reader.

It is with a heavy heart that I rate this book 1 out of 4 stars. It has so much potential. A good round of editing would do it so much good.

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Post by Bclubgrl58 » 02 Sep 2018, 09:24

It sounds like the author needed some more inspiration and a proofreader. That's not a fun read for you to have to put up with the strange plot and bad grammar. I really hope the next book you read is much better for you. But thanks for saving some of us from having to endure this book. :techie-reference:

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Post by Emi_Review » 03 Sep 2018, 08:01

That's such a shame to hear about the grammar issues and the rushed ending. I usually love sci-fi/fantasy and it seemed like an interesting storyline. Thank you for the review, I think I'll give this one a miss.

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Post by kandscreeley » 04 Sep 2018, 13:46

I love your summary. It really had me interesting and intrigued. Sadly, I lost my interest when I saw how bad the grammar was and how rushed the ending was. I love the thought of the book, but it sounds like the execution needs help.
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Post by FictionLover » 09 Sep 2018, 22:13

The plot sounds great, but the writing sounds not so great.

I almost want to read it to see how bad it could be. Almost.
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