Review of Pathic The Time Stain
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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Pathic The Time Stain" by Larry Jordan.]
This book, 𝘗𝘢𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘤: 𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘛𝘪𝘮𝘦 𝘚𝘵𝘢𝘪𝘯 by L. Jordan, presents an action-packed story that takes the reader on a journey with a Dragon Lord named Webo Azhi, who is a Pathic and a son of Livia and Azhi.
Livia, Webo Azhi's mother, who is sick, tells Webo some information about his late father, causing Webo to want to wield revenge against the people who could have betrayed his father. However, Webo, knowing much about his late father, could also pose some risks to other Pathics in the galaxy. But Webo is determined to go all out to seek the truth about his pathic nature, about his late father, and to carry out revenge. Will Webo manage to save his mother using the living crystals? Will he manage to successfully wage revenge? Grab a copy of this book to read on and discover the answers yourself.
What entertained me most about this book were the time stains and the visions experienced by Webo Azhi. They created in me a desire to keep reading on to find out how the scene would end. The numerous transitions from one world to another also stirred my emotions and increased my curiosity even further. Moving from one world to the other introduced other characters that developed the book into a bigger and bigger story.
I was also excited about how the author was able to mold so many characters without confusion. For example, I was excited by characters like Offer, Basque, Webo Azhi, Qlee, Ian, Ezz, Heard, and Kane.
What I singled out as a shortcoming for this book was a change of spelling for some names. For example, I met 'Heron' and 'Heran' and could not tell whether they referred to one place.
I proudly give this book 𝐚 𝟒 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐨𝐟 𝟓-𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫 rating. I enjoyed the many actions I read about in this book. The one star deducted is because of the above-named shortcoming. I met one grammar error in the book.
I recommend this book to people who like science fiction stories. They will find the battles among Pathics entertaining.
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Pathic The Time Stain
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This book, 𝘗𝘢𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘤: 𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘛𝘪𝘮𝘦 𝘚𝘵𝘢𝘪𝘯 by L. Jordan, presents an action-packed story that takes the reader on a journey with a Dragon Lord named Webo Azhi, who is a Pathic and a son of Livia and Azhi.
Livia, Webo Azhi's mother, who is sick, tells Webo some information about his late father, causing Webo to want to wield revenge against the people who could have betrayed his father. However, Webo, knowing much about his late father, could also pose some risks to other Pathics in the galaxy. But Webo is determined to go all out to seek the truth about his pathic nature, about his late father, and to carry out revenge. Will Webo manage to save his mother using the living crystals? Will he manage to successfully wage revenge? Grab a copy of this book to read on and discover the answers yourself.
What entertained me most about this book were the time stains and the visions experienced by Webo Azhi. They created in me a desire to keep reading on to find out how the scene would end. The numerous transitions from one world to another also stirred my emotions and increased my curiosity even further. Moving from one world to the other introduced other characters that developed the book into a bigger and bigger story.
I was also excited about how the author was able to mold so many characters without confusion. For example, I was excited by characters like Offer, Basque, Webo Azhi, Qlee, Ian, Ezz, Heard, and Kane.
What I singled out as a shortcoming for this book was a change of spelling for some names. For example, I met 'Heron' and 'Heran' and could not tell whether they referred to one place.
I proudly give this book 𝐚 𝟒 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐨𝐟 𝟓-𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫 rating. I enjoyed the many actions I read about in this book. The one star deducted is because of the above-named shortcoming. I met one grammar error in the book.
I recommend this book to people who like science fiction stories. They will find the battles among Pathics entertaining.
******
Pathic The Time Stain
View: on Bookshelves |
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