Official Review: Celeste (The Dark Queen, #1)

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Official Review: Celeste (The Dark Queen, #1)

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Celeste (The Dark Queen, #1)" by Samantha Eklund.]
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3 out of 4 stars
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Celeste by Samantha Eklund is a fantasy novel set in a fantasy world. The battle between light and dark, good and evil, love and hate, wages on in this tale of survival, betrayal, and love.

Celeste is the queen of Vehrys. Kiev is her husband and the son of the vile queen in the neighboring kingdom. Celeste has never questioned Kiev’s love, until he stabs her at her 26th birthday party. He’s vying for power, but could he be doing it alone? Celeste finds herself trapped in no-man’s land between the two kingdoms after her capture and escape. The world has plunged into darkness and all she wants to do is return to her people so that she can help bring back the light. Decomposing beasts roam everywhere killing at will and filling the world with their evil presence. She can’t find her way back home but has discovered a way to fight the creatures that stalk her. Soon, her childhood friend, Scythe, finds her and endeavors to help her return and fight the evil settling in within her country’s walls. He’s always loved her. Could this be his chance to finally have that love returned?

Gohrkrull is the god of darkness. Excaliah is the god of light. Gohrkrull can only be present in the lands of mortals if he’s been summoned freely by a soul of pure evil. Celeste can’t imagine that Kiev has a soul of pure evil and she’s just never realized it before, but who else could have summoned him? Excaliah does all that he can to aid his champion of light and her companions, but there is only so much a god can do.

Overall, I enjoyed reading this book. There were so many dynamic and unique characters that we got to see develop throughout the book. No one remained untouched by the catastrophe. Celeste started out as a strong female lead but even she grew into a better person, though with plenty of scars. Scythe was a realistic character with easily relatable emotions. Celeste’s friend and general, Mauve, was also an impressive character. Her religious devotion, military ferocity, and unerring motherly love were all things I absolutely loved about her. Her stubbornness was portrayed perfectly, making her extremely lifelike. Several scenes started from one person’s point of view but switched midway to someone else’s. This way, we got to see how others were reacting and perceiving situations. I feel the author did this well by ending the previous section, creating a break in the text, and starting a new section.

Most of the story is action packed, but parts throughout the book moved extremely slowly. Celeste is trapped in the barren land between the two countries for several months. At first, I didn’t like that nothing seemed to be happening during this time. Once I made it through this section, I realized a lot had happened that could not have been accomplished believably overnight. Celeste needed to develop her skills and get acclimated with her newfound powers. Vehrys needed to be overrun by monsters and conquerors. Kiev’s mind had to slip farther and farther under Gohrkrull’s control. None of these things could have happened instantly without the reader questioning the timeline's validity.

Unfortunately, there were a lot of editing mistakes throughout the book. Extra words, missing words, and misspelled words riddled the text, repeatedly breaking the flow. Because of this, I rate this book 3 out of 4 stars. I wish I could have rated this higher but the mistakes were too often to ignore. I highly recommend this book to lovers of fantasy novels, especially if you enjoy character development and love-triangles. I could also recommend this to young adults since there is no explicit material included.

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This sounds like a great fantasy novel. It’s a shame that it needs more editing, though. I’m always disappointed when a good book doesn’t get the editing it deserves.
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I hope that the author is considering a second version to polish all the typos, because this sounds like a brilliant dark fantasy novel and I would read it and recommend it to my niece!
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Post by JR Mercier »

OOOOh. Getting stabbed on her 26th birthday and a man named Scythe? Sign me up. I hope this gets edited better because it sounds wonderful if only it weren't for those typos.
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Post by Marissa Michael »

What a fascinating book with a good review. We can learn alot from this book particularly about the timeline validity where "Celeste needed to develop her skills and get acclimated with her newfound powers..." because life is marathon not short cut. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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It's been a long long time since I've seen a fantasy novel I'm interested in, but this one sounds really intriguing. It's a shame about the grammatical errors interrupting the flow, though!
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If I'm sufficiently engaged in the characters, I can definitely handle slower moving parts. It sounds like the characters in this one are nicely developed and unique. I am definitely going to have to check this one out. Thanks so much for your review.
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What a shame about the poor editing letting it down. A cracking review. :tiphat:
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Wow, stabbed by her husband. Sounds like this book has some serious power plays going on. I am glad it does not have any explicit scenes either which is a deal breaker for me. Thanks for the review.
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The book sounds interesting. I don't mind checking it out even with the typos and other error since it doesn't interrupt the free flow of the message and its understanding. Well, it won't be a bad idea if it's re-edited for it to be a world standard piece.
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nice review about the fantasy book which goes with battle between good and evil and thought the content was o.k but editing mistakes eaten its score
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Post by mariacarolinea »

This sounds like such a great novel, one you just can't drop it and have to read it till the end. I'm very intrigued with how layered and powerful Celeste seems. Unfortunately, it's very sad to see there are so many mistakes, that can be really discouraging. Thank you for the detailed review!
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I'm always in the mood for fantasy novels that deal with royalty, and especially if there are strong female characters involved. It sounds like if the editing and pacing was worked out, it would have a lot of potential to be a great book.
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Sounds great. I like that the main character is a strong female even after everything that has happened to her. The love triangle gives it a nice twist and I hope that she can find love again and save her people. This is a book that I would defiantly read.
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Thank you for such a lovely review! I'm a sucker for rounded characters, especially strong females. I'm definitely putting this on my to-read list!
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